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Constructed Responses Moonrise. Moonrise by Jenette Purcell.
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Moonriseby Jenette Purcell • City night skygives itself to me againwhen I have so little left to receive it.I am dark, crumblingand you are rivers and trees awaysearching your own night sky for a sign.The strong gates of your heartare wide open to me always, but,if only.So I wait, as seasons before, decades before,fathers and mothers before me still insidewatch and listen.Suddenly,bamboo, bones, fiber, fences,water, glistening koi,*all the tiny rooms,paths and places I hold your memoriesrelaxin audible, reverent wonderat the fullness formingon this horizon’s edge.*koi: colorful fish that symbolize love and friendship
Constructed response question • In Moonrise, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem. Use evidence to support your response.
Tips to remember when answering constructed responses! • You are limited to 4 lines! There is NO space for summaries!! • 1st sentence/line~ address/answer the question specifically (thesis statement) • 2nd sentence/line~ a quote or paraphrase from the text that specifically supports your first sentence. • 3rd sentence/line~ your analysis, explanation, elaboration or connection of 2nd and 1st sentence. • 4th sentence/line~ Closing statement, inference, or significance.
First sentence/Line ~ Answer the question making sure to specifically identify any of the literary terms the question asks for, your thesis. Question In Moonrise, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem. Answer • In Moonrise, the theme love is complicated develops through the changing mood.
Sentence/Line 2 ~Use specific details and examples from the text to support your sentence 1. Question In Moonrise, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem. • Answer: • When the speaker says, “…you are rivers and trees away…” she implies that separation has complicated their relationship creating a mournful mood.
Sentence/line 3 Analyze, elaborate or connect the text to sentence 1…DO NOT SUMMARIZE! Question In Moonrise, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem. • Answer • There is a shift in the mood when the speaker says, “Suddenly…” and is followed by a “reverent wonder”.
Sentence/line 4 Closing statement, inference, or significance. Question In Moonrise, identify a theme and explain how the theme is developed throughout the poem. • Answer • The dual mood shows how love can have its ups and downs and is complicated.
Final answer • In Moonrise, the theme love is complicated develops through the changing mood. When the speaker says, “…you are rivers and trees away…” she implies that separation has complicated their relationship creating a mournful mood. There is a shift in the mood when the speaker says, “Suddenly…” and is followed by a “reverent wonder”. The dual mood shows how love can have its ups and downs and is complicated. • FINAL THOUGHT!WRITE SMALL!!!!!