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“Plant a Tree” Organization Day 3. How should every good essay end? What is the problem with the end of this essay? Write a strong conclusion for “Plant a Tree.”. Fri sday , October 29, 2010. Student Goals. Write a personal reflection. Practice sentence combining.
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“Plant a Tree” Organization Day 3 • How should every good essay end? • What is the problem with the end of this essay? • Write a strong conclusion for “Plant a Tree.” Frisday, October 29, 2010
Student Goals • Write a personal reflection. • Practice sentence combining. • Use Microsoft Word XP Review Tools to revise of rough draft.
Sentence Combining Review • Jerry keeps a journal. • It is a daily journal. • Jerry keeps a daily journal.
Sentence Combining Review • Felipe ordered a windbreaker from the catalog. • It is navy blue and waterproof. • Felipe ordered a navy blue waterproof windbreaker from the catalog.
Sentence Combining Review • The car is old and rusted out in places. • It is a hatchback. • The car, a hatchback, is old and rusted out in places.
Sentence Combining Review • Elizabeth received a job offer. • The florist near her house made the offer. • Elizabeth received a job offer from the florist near her house.
Sentence Combining Review , Fred, • My oldest brother is a senior at Northwestern University. • His name is Fred.
Homework • Week 9, Countdown for Testing, due Mon., Nov. 1.