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INTRO INTO DESCRIPTIVE WRITING...THERE IS ANOTHER WORD DOCUMENT WHICH IS THE WORKSHEET TO HELP THE CHILDREN WITH ADJECTIVES
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Journeys Mrs. Kidwai 17th November 2016
What do you think of when you think of a journey?What is your idea of a great journey? • Let’s talk…
Why is this journey important/famous or significant for you? Divide this journey into 3 or more parts of day Description of a journey Sensory details:Sights, smells, tastes, sounds, feelings do you experience? What is the atmosphere? What happens around you?
What’s the difference? • 5 minute conversation about a journey you went on • 1 hour conversation about a journey you went on
Tips • Focus on the subject/theme • Use of words: Paint a picture..helps to create a mental image; Describe the person, place or object (Adjectives, adverbs, comparatives, superlatives) • I looked at the mountain on my journey. • I stared excitedly at the snow-capped mountain, as I started my longest journey. • Reader interest: Paint a picture using ‘5 senses’ • Re-reading and redo
My Journey As I hiked up the dangerous and slippery path, there is a trail that extends before me, leading into the horizon as I look upon the daylight. At times, this road is straight and narrow. At other places, the trail twists and bends, even branching out into separate paths. Eventually, though, it will lead me to the end. And the end shall be well worth the journey.
Practise…15 mins Imagine you are alone in a forest. Write a short and highly descriptive account of the: • Sights • Sounds • Feelings