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Understanding the Process. By R. Milian. LAL 11B PREPARED BY R. MILIAN. The road to a good essay follows a process. Your essays suffer from a lack of process . You are unclear about it. You would like to understand it better.
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Understandingthe Process By R. Milian LAL 11B PREPARED BY R. MILIAN
I will show you three simplerules to better understand the process
3.Writing the information 1. Gathering the information 2. Organizing the information
Use one notebook exclusively for LAL 11B LAL 11 B NOTES MR. MILIAN’S CLASS TODAY’S LESSON READ AN EXCERPT OF BENJAMIN FRANKLIN’S AUTOBIOGRAPHY POINTS MADE BY THE TEACHER WHAT DO I THINK ABOUT IT?
Do not to mix your notes with information from other classes SCIENCE NOTES LAL 11 B NOTES
Gathering informationsummary Take down notes Study the information Go beyond book
You need to edit your information Information
In the organizer, write down the three ideas you have decided to use
Organize them from the most important to the least important
In the subcategory support your ideas Subcategory Central Park Details Zoo Details Lake Details Great Lawn
When you support your reasons write the details in fragments
Organizing the informationSummary subcategory Edit the information Putting ideas together Creating a subcategory
In the introduction incorporate your three ideas New York buildings Times Square Central Park
The three ideas must be written in parallel structure I like New York City for places like The Statue of Liberty, Central Park, and Times Square.
The reader will have a clear picture of what you are going to talk about Central Park Times Square Buildings
The second part is writing the body of the essay Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 3
Each one of your ideas will be one paragraph Idea 1 + subcategory details One Paragraph Idea 2 + subcategory details One Paragraph Idea 3 + subcategory details One Paragraph
Each paragraph must have a minimum of eight sentences 8 sentences
In each paragraph incorporate the details from your subcategories Central Park Central Park Zoo Central Park Lake Central Park Horse carriage
The conclusion can be a brief summary of your three ideas Conclusion New York is fascinating for its buildings, Times Square, and Central Park
If you decide not to summarize, come up with your own ending This is what New York City offers the world
Writing the informationsummary conclusion Start the introduction Write the body Write the conclusion
3.Writing the information 1. Gathering the information 2. Organizing the information