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PROBLEM IN GREENSVILLE. BY LOGAN DORMAN. CHAPTER I.
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PROBLEM IN GREENSVILLE BY LOGAN DORMAN
CHAPTER I It was hot outside today. I live in the town of Greensville, Pennsylvania. We have a weird mountain in our town. I’m Logan and I’m 9 years old. I am at my house watching TV with my friends Colin, Joey, and Gorge.[ I don’t really like Gorge]. My dog Sonic was lying on my lap. “Logie don’t forget to feed your fly trap!” my sister Samantha said.
“Sure and don’t call me Logie!”I said. Then I decided we should go outside. We went down stairs. Then George said he had to get his gum. We waited 1 hour. “I think he snuck out the back door. What a nuisance!”I said. So then I went back up stairs. Then I noticed his receipt and his gum. The receipt said magic gum. Weird, I thought. Then I saw my fly trap eating the gum! Before I could get the gum something amazing happened he disappeared.
Chapter 2 Where did he go? A mystery was set to find my fly trap. The next day I woke up it was hot again like yesterday my friends were going to look for my fly trap today. So I went outside. To my surprise Colin was the only one out. “ Where are the others?” I asked. He shrugged his shoulders. “I think I found a clue” he said. It was a penny covered in blue goop. “GROSS!”I said in disgust. “Let’s just go!”he said.
All of a sudden the ground started to shake. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! “It ate our friends!”Colin screamed. That was when I knew I was doomed.
Chapter 3 Colin and I ran past town scared and confused. That was when we saw the biggest fly trap ever! We both exchanged frightened glances . GGGGGGGGGGIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! “My fly trap!” It splattered blue goop on my neighbor’s house and it melted.
I thought about the craziest idea ever …. I had to go in it . What choice do I have? Here I go.
Chapter 4 I jumped into it’s mouth. It was hot and sticky. I fell down it’s throat. I landed on a car floating in the stomach acid. There was a hole on the side filled with blue goop. I stuck a boulder in the hole. “Grab on!” a voice yelled. The voice threw a rope down . I did as he instructed . As I climbed out I noticed the fly trap got bigger!
I climbed out. The fly trap kept growing . It grew as big as the Empire state building! “SHE’S GONNA BLOW!” Colin yelled. Colin and I hid behind the goo covered house. BOOOM!!! I spotted my fly trap and George. When they hit the ground I said, “Why did you do that ?” I looked down at him . He looked like he was dead .
chapter5 “Ohhh” he moaned. “He’s knocked out,” I said. When he woke up he moaned, “OWW!” Just then the ground started to shake . A volcano rose out of the ground. “HELP!” someone called. The volcano had erupted. “OWWWW!” I yelled. The volcano had killed me.
Chapter 6 I woke up to see Sonic licking my face. “What a dream!” I said to Sonic. He licked me again. “Down boy, down!” I checked to see if my fly trap was there. Sure enough it was there. But it had a lump in it’s stomach . “Samantha!” I yelled. Where was she? Then the fly trap spit out a white cloth. Oh no it ate her!