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LO: To improve my ability to write a film analysis analytical essay. Things done well . Most people remembered the basic structure of an essay Quotes were used Most people showed an understanding of change. Things to improve. Linking sentences Use of ‘big ideas’ in writing
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LO: To improve my ability to write a film analysis analytical essay
Things done well • Most people remembered the basic structure of an essay • Quotes were used • Most people showed an understanding of change
Things to improve • Linking sentences • Use of ‘big ideas’ in writing • Film techniques • Conclusions • Timing – how much can you write? • Some people need to keep working on TEEL
Things to improve cont… • Answering the question • Do a question attack in your head: • “R.U.F. are fighting for the people!” No one does anything for anyone in the film Blood Diamond without wanting something in return. Do you agree? • Eg: What do the characters want? • Do they always get something in return? • What are their motives? Are they always selfish? • Who is concerned about the bigger picture and who is concerned only about themselves?
Confusions…. • You can’t pluck a quote without knowing it’s context. Many said • There are millions of people in Africa, why should I help just one? • In reference to Maddy’s attitude. What you missed: “I can't believe I just said that.” What does this say about her?
Motivations • What is a motivation?
Which characters change why? What do they learn? Include motivations.
How to study. • Complete table for the following characters, use your notes from the oral to help you. • Danny • Maddy • Captain Poison • Benjamin Kampany
BIG IDEAS • Complete a mindmap fort the following ideas, these words should appear in your topic sentences, introductions and conclusions • Greed • Selfishness • Poverty • Corruption • Hope • Freedom • Humanitarianism
Practice question • The best thing you can do is have another go at writing a practice question. This is only an hour of your time. • Or, write a plan for the question. Write your contention and topic sentences. Do you have evidence to support the ideas?
Question • Blood Diamond explores the ramifications of human greed. Discuss.