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Bell Vocabulary 9.1. perspicacity n. Acuteness or discernment pertinacious adj. Persistent or unyielding pervade v. To pass or spread through every part. Week 10 Comparison-Contrast. Chapter 16. Purpose. Choosing a subject Your personal opinions on the subject *** Evidence?
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Bell Vocabulary 9.1 • perspicacity n. Acuteness or discernment • pertinacious adj. Persistent or unyielding • pervade v. To pass or spread through every part
Week 10 Comparison-Contrast Chapter 16
Purpose • Choosing a subject • Your personal opinions on the subject *** • Evidence? • Making decisions • Convincing your reader • Consider your audience
Helpful strategies • Subjects must have both similarities and differences • Stay focused- Don’t just list characteristics- explain significance • Strong thesis- specific points • Organization- • One side at a time • Point by point • transitions
Example and discussion • Page 367 “the Ugly Truth About Beauty” • Focus on the thesis and Cause/effect examples as well as his method of organization.
Essay practice- Choose a topic • A “how to” guide for studying • A two career family versus a one career family • Two approaches to parenting • bilingual services • Socialized medicine
Start writing! • Basic outline! • Introduction and body paragraphs by the end of the hour. • Be prepared to peer edit tomorrow!
Bell Vocabulary 9.2 • pestilence n. A raging epidemic. • pestilent adj. Having a malign influence or effect • petulant adj. Displaying impatience
Turn in by end of class: Draft +Peer edit • 2peers- include name • One paragraph each • Must be attached to your draft
Scoring- 10 pts • Thesis- no three prong – 1pt • Compare/contrast equally addressed- 2 pts • Evidence to support statements- 2 pts • 2 different relevant comparisons- 1 pt • Analyzes 2+ reasons for similarity or difference- 1pt • Outline – 1pt • Peer edits- 2pts
Bell Vocabulary 9.3 • picayune adj. Of small value • pique v. To excite a slight degree of anger in • platitude n. A written or spoken statement that is flat, dull, or commonplace
Bell Vocabulary 9.4 • poignancy n. Severity or acuteness, especially of pain or grief. • polemics n. The art of controversy or disputation • portent n. Anything that indicates what is to happen
Final draft • Write your final draft of your compare/contrast essay. • Anyone who attempts to turn in a weak copy of their first draft will not receive credit beyond a D.
Writer’s detour- MONSTERS! • You will create a short (2page) work of fiction in the genre of horror about one of the following topics. • Traffic cones • Telephone poles • Cactus • School lunch ladies