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Writing. Hu Aili 胡爱丽 Jin Cai Experimental Middle School. Words about “study”. What do the numbers refer to?. ☆. ☆. ☆. 4. Structure. Tips:. Choose the correct form of the topic Choose the topic that you are familiar with Choose the topic that is full of new ideas.
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Writing Hu Aili 胡爱丽 Jin Cai Experimental Middle School
Tips: • Choose the correct form of the topic • Choose the topic that you are familiar with • Choose the topic that is full of new ideas
Study brings me _____ • Use the following points as a reference • What does study bring you? • Why do you think so? • How do you study? (give an example/ examples) Q1 Q2 & Q3 conclusion
Study brings me happiness Q2. Why do you think so? Because I can gain a lot of knowledge. Because I can gain knowledge of some subjects. Because I can gain knowledge of my favorite subjects, such as English writing.
Study brings me happiness Q3. How do you study?(give an example/ examples) I can gain a lot of useful knowledge of English by listening to the English programs.
Tips: • Use all the reference points • Write the things full of details
Grammar 8 〞 Study brings me happy Study brings me happy. In my opinion, although study is very tried, but it can bring me a lot of things. Such as friends, knowledge and responsibility. I am like study very much. I think I work very hardly. Because sometimes I even want to give up. But I never do it. There is no deny that learn is very important.
Common Mistakes in writing • 1.capital letters or lowercase letters • spelling mistakes • punctuation mistakes • 4.grammar mistakes • tense • passive voice or active voice • collocation of phrases • …
Study brings me power as well as happiness. Study brings me power. It also brings me happiness. Study brings me not only power but also happiness. What power and happiness Study brings me! Study brings me power. What’s more, it brings me happiness. When I study, I can get power and happiness. I think study brings me power and happiness.
Structure 3〞 Tips: Good phrases. Good sentences. Proper conjunction words.
School uniform rule has its advantages. we don’t have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day. we don’t need to worry about competing with others based on how we look. It has some disadvantages. Our individuality can’t be shown if we wear the same clothes every day… Sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned.
First of all School uniform rule has its advantages. _________, we don’t have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day. _________, we don’t need to worry about competing with others based on how we look. _________, it has some disadvantages. Our individuality can’t be shown if we wear the same clothes every day…______________, sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned. In addition However What’s more
Beginning: As we all know , There is no denying that… In my opinion, … Body: what’s more, in addition, last but not least on one hand, on the other hand Each coin has two sides. in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, for example, in other words, to one’s joy/ surprise… Ending: needless to say, generally speaking,in a word, all in all…
Revise the article: Study brings me happiness As a student, I study every day. And I have learnd a lot. I think study brings me a lot of happiness. Because study, I know a lot of things. It is really a good thing. I study very hard. I listen to the teachers carefully and do homework well. And I think I will feel happier, won’t I ? (60 words)
Study No pains, no gains. Practice makes perfect. Where there is a will, there is a way.
Homework: An interesting lesson Use the following points as a reference. ● When did you have an interesting lesson? What lesson was it? ● What did you do during the lesson? ● Why was it interesting? (Give one or two reasons)