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October 29, 2013 - Springboard Embedded Assessment 2 Prewriting H omework:

October 29, 2013 - Springboard Embedded Assessment 2 Prewriting H omework: C omplete rough draft of expository essay. O bjective: S tudents will brainstorm ideas and use a prewriting graphic organizer to gather and organize ideas. Wa rm Up (in your composition book)

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October 29, 2013 - Springboard Embedded Assessment 2 Prewriting H omework:

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  1. October 29, 2013 - Springboard Embedded Assessment 2 Prewriting Homework: Complete rough draft of expository essay. Objective: Students will brainstorm ideas and use a prewriting graphic organizer to gather and organize ideas. Warm Up (in your composition book) Date your notes, write down the objective In SB, turn to pg. 62 Highlight your assignment for Embedded Assessment 2

  2. Your assignment... To write an expository essay explaining how a change in your life has affected your life today.

  3. Complete the chart responsibilities family relationships / structure friends hobbies school

  4. Once you have identified the change you want to use for your expository essay, be able to explain why the change occurred and the impact the change has had on your life.

  5. You will use the essay He Might Have Liked Me Better With My Tail as the model for your expository essay introductory hook thesis statement topic sentences in supporting paragraphs supporting details conclusion

  6. Introductory paragraph Starts with a good hook Identifies the topic of change Contains a thesis statement that mentions the change in a "then and now format"

  7. 1st body paragraph Topic sentence - THEN Two examples, each supported by two sentences of elaboration. Concluding sentence that restates the topic sentence

  8. 2nd body paragraph Topic sentence - NOW Two examples, each supported by two sentences of elaboration. Concluding sentence that restates the topic sentence

  9. Conclusion Topic sentence - reminds reader of your original thesis about a change in you The significance of the change and its impact both now and in the future What have you learned/ realized that you didn't know before? What are you looking forward to? End with a hook, if possible

  10. Let's take a look at the rubric for this assignment and then we will look at some exemplars.

  11. So now, you will complete the first part of your Evidence of Writing Process Select ONE of the topics from the chart...On a separate sheet of paper that will be turned in, recreate ONE topic from the chart... You pick only ONE of these Then, when I was ____ years old Explanation Cause/effects Now that I am ____ years old Responsibilities Family structure Friends Hobbies School

  12. Have you heard of the story about giving up everything for the one you love? You know, the way they say true lovers often do? My advice is, don’t do it! I gave up my voice for a chance to win the love of a prince. It was a bad bargain and the change in my life was immediate. When I was a girl, I was safe and happy and powerful, but now that I am on land, I am sick and lonely and weak.

  13. Before I relinquished my voice, I didn’t realize how strong and happy I was. I had a loving family and friends and my voice was celebrated by all who heard it. I sang sea songs for all the other mer-people, who listened with pleasure and appreciation. My singing was like the gentle sound of wind chimes swaying in the sea breezes. I took my beautiful voice and my carefree life under the sea for granted. I thought a better life awaited me on the land. All I needed was two legs and the prince. My life changed forever when I decided to trade my voice for the chance to live happily ever after. I got my wish to live on land and became like other two-legged creatures. I believed the change would make all the difference.

  14. But even though I was able to run, and walk, and dance, I still was unable to win the prince’s love. I could not express to him who I was, what I believed, who I loved because I had no voice. I had legs and love, but with no voice I couldn’t convince the prince of my love. Furthermore, my new legs and my ignorance about the ways of the land made my life difficult. The prince pined for the mermaid he lost, the one with the beautiful voice, and when he could not have her, he looked elsewhere for love. Unable to talk to anyone, and without anyone around me who knew me, I was unbearably lonely. I could not be who I was. I wasn’t happy or strong; I was sad and weak. And finally the prince chose someone else, someone who was happy and who had a beautiful voice.

  15. The day I changed from a mermaid of the sea to a prisoner of the land was the most important day of my life. Now I live in a little hut by the sea, silently singing the sea songs of my girlhood, pining for the voice I once had.

  16. Homework: Complete your rough draft. The COMPLETED copy is due for tomorrow's class.

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