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Mini-writing/Developing Character through facial expression and unconscious movement. Charlotte was scared. Too frightened to cry out, she remained absolutely still until her shaking hand reached for the dirk. Now you try . Zacharias was afraid. Mini-Editing Lesson.
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Mini-writing/Developing Character through facial expression and unconscious movement. Charlotte was scared. Too frightened to cry out, she remained absolutely still until her shaking hand reached for the dirk. Now you try. Zacharias was afraid.
Mini-Editing Lesson 1. mr. hollybrass shouted have mr morgan set the main clewgarnet to rights 2. miss doyle the captain said are they not the laziest dirtiest dogs