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Grammar Tip of the Week!

Grammar Tip of the Week!. Week Four Omitting Needless Words (from Strunk and White’s Elements of Style ). Omit Needless Words. Vigorous writing is concise.

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Grammar Tip of the Week!

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  1. Grammar Tip of the Week! Week Four Omitting Needless Words (from Strunk and White’s Elements of Style)

  2. Omit Needless Words • Vigorous writing is concise. • A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. • This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.

  3. Identifying Needless Words • Many expressions in common use violate this principle. • The question as to whether = whether (the question whether) • There is no doubt but that =no doubt (doubtless) • Used for fuel purposes = used for fuel • He is a man who = he • In a hasty manner = • This is a subject that = • The reason why is that =

  4. The Fact That… • An expression that is debilitating is the fact that. It should be revised out of every sentence in which it occurs. • Owing to the fact that = since (because) • In spite of the fact that = though (although) • Call your attention to the fact that = remind you • I was unaware of the fact that = I was unaware that • The fact that he had not succeeded = • The fact that I had arrived =

  5. Along the Same Lines… • The words case, character, and nature are often traps! A writer should omit these words whenever possible. • In many cases, the rooms were poorly ventilated BECOMES Many of the rooms were poorly ventilated. • It has rarely been the case that any mistake has been made BECOMES Few mistakes have been made. • Acts of a hostile character BECOMES hostile acts • Acts of a hostile nature BECOMES hostile acts

  6. Who is & Which was… • Who is, which was, and the like are often superfluous. • His brother, who is a member of the same firm… BECOMES His brother, a member of the same firm… • Trafalgar, which was Nelson’s last battle BECOMES Trafalgar, Nelson’s last battle… • Remember, a positive statement is more concise than a negative one, and the active voice more concise than the passive. • Avoid presenting a single complex idea, step by step, in a series of sentences that might to advantage be combined into one.

  7. Make the Language More Concrete and Direct: Over 50 Words! (Rewrite it as <30 words) • Macbeth was very mean. This led him to wish to become leader of his country. The women told him that this idea of his would come true. The head of the land at this time was Duncan. Encouraged by his wife, Macbeth does away with Duncan. He was thus enabled to take over for Duncan as the new leader.

  8. 26 Words • Encouraged by his wife, Macbeth achieved his ambition and realized the prediction of the witches by murdering Duncan and becoming king of Scotland in his place.

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