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Proofreading Warm-up. Item 1 In the Hell described by Dante in his epic work soules they are punishd accordding to how they have sined. Corrected In the Hell described by Dante in his epic work , souls are punished according to how they have sinned . (first they deleted).
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Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 In the Hell described by Dante in his epic work soules they are punishd accordding to how they have sined. Corrected In the Hell described by Dante in his epic work,souls are punishedaccording to how they have sinned. (first they deleted)
Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 in Dantes Hell the lowwest levels are reserved for the most worst sinners because they are the farther from god. Corrected In Dante’s Hell the lowest levels are reserved for the worst sinners because they are the farthest from God. (most deleted)
Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 To who do lost souls appeal if they have refuse to stand up for their principals. Corrected To whom do lost souls appeal if they have refused to stand up for their principles?
Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 Alice has never wrote no sonnets and don’t think she ever will. Corrected Alice has never written any sonnets and doesn’t think she ever will.
Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 To hélène is such a sad poem Luella said that it almost made me cry Corrected “ ‘To Hélène’ is such a sad poem,” Luella said,“that it almost made me cry.”
Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 The poet is thinking juanita concured about how hélène will feel after time has past. Corrected “The poet is thinking,”Juanita concurred, “about how Hélène will feel after time has passed.”
Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 Before he became a knight don quixote is always readding about chivalry, however to much fantasy made him loose his mind. Corrected Before he became a knight,Don Quixote was always reading about chivalry; however,too much fantasy made him lose his mind.
Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 the cardboard visor he made for his helmet didnt work very good Corrected The cardboard visor he made for his helmet didn’t work very well.
Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 “Theirs alot of humor and satire in Don Quixote” Ms garcia said. Corrected “There’s a lot of humor and satire in Don Quixote,” Ms. Garcia said.
Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 In new york city in the 1960s the musical play man of la mancha was performed on broadway. Corrected In New York City in the 1960s, the musical play Man of La Mancha was performed on Broadway.
Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 Don Quixote describe his quest to do right in the song the impossible dream Corrected Don Quixote describes his quest to do right in the song “The Impossible Dream.”
Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 Do you think La Fontaine’s fable The Council Held By The Rats are humorrous. Corrected Do you think La Fontaine’s fable “The Council Held by the Rats” is humorous?
Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 Skilled in many different kinds of writting Voltaire’s plays were highly successful. Corrected Skilled in many different kinds of writing, Voltaire wrote highly successful plays. (sentence revised)
Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 because he criticized the morale principals of the french voltaire was sent to prison twice. Corrected Because he criticized the moral principles of the French,Voltaire was sent to prison twice.
