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Join the class wiki for today's Bell-Ringer quiz, vocabulary review, collaboration activities, and writing workshop on comparison essays. Explore the history of the word "martinet" and dive into early civilization comparisons.
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Thursday, January 16th Bell-Ringer: Please log on to your computer and go to the class wiki (chswhap.wikispaces.com). On the “Bell Ringers and Agendas” page you will find a hyperlink for your pass/fail quiz #1. Enter your first and last name and begin the quiz. You have 15 minutes.
Daily Agenda: • Bell-Ringer: Pass/Fail Quiz #1 • Word of the Day: martinet • Vocabulary Review Pyramid • Collaboration: Open Compare and Contrast Organizer • Writing Workshop: The Comparison Essay Homework: Finish Comparison Essay Essential Question: Did all early civilizations follow the same path of development? If not, how did differing paths lead to different societal characteristics?
Click the picture to view a video clip of a Marine Drill Sergeant Read-Aloud January 16, Block 1 MARTINET- a strict disciplinarian; a person who demands absolute adherence to forms and rules Pronunciation The word MARTINET is derived after Jean Martinet, an army officer during the reign of Louis XIV in France. He was a tough drill master known for his strict adherence to rules and discipline. He was killed by friendly fire during the siege of Duisburg in 1672. The Marine Drill Sergeants at Parris Island are renowned for being merciless MARTINETS. As readers of Harry Potter are well aware, MARTINETS are not limited to the military. In Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Dolores Umbridge was a MARTINET who tried to impose rigid standards of discipline on the students and faculty at Hogwarts.
Vocabulary Pyramid Can you get your classmate to identify all 6 terms? Rules: No spelling or implying the spelling of word (“sounds like”), no use of rhyming words, cannot use any word in the term or part/form of any of the words.
Yahweh Neolithic Revolution Cuneiform Pastoral Domesticate Hominid
Group Comparison: • Working in your new partner, complete the Open Compare and Contrast worksheet to compare any two river valley civilizations society. Be sure that your differences are direct comparisons. Assigned Partners Rebecca and Sarah McKenzie and Savanna Abby, Patty, and Ethan Brandon and Chris Madison and Kes Jordan and Michael Kayla and Tara Matthew and Erika Zae and Jacob Taeven and Cheyann Dakotah and Zach Issy and Deanna
The Comparison Essay Guidelines and Expectations for Good AP Writing
Know the Rubric Comparison means to say what is the same and what is different. This says at LEAST one – you need THREE – Rule of 3!!! Analyze means to say “why” – why is there a difference or similarity (or to what degree)
So how do I set up my essay? Remember you only get points for pointing out the similarities and differences. Consider the following…
If you do the following… Where are you going to compare and contrast???
The following also has some issues Can work, but not always
Best format to get POINTS This requires a lot of prewriting – if you have time, do this!!!
Use Outline Thesis – Same as before – answer question, use groups, and give hints Political Goals and Outcomes Economic Goals and Outcomes Military Goals and Outcomes Evidence (at least 3 detailed comparisons) Evidence(at least 3 detailed comparisons) Evidence (at least 3 detailed comparisons) Conclusion
Common Problems Describing the two things/events separately (with great evidence) but never comparing and/or contrasting – NO POINTS FOR DESCRIBING Confusing dates, people, and places Running out of time and not finishing
Length: 3-7 sentences Organization: Background Argument Roadmap Background: Attention-Getter (prove you understand history/set the stage). Set the stage for your thesis. Argument (Thesis): Must be explicit, comparative, and avoid restating question. Roadmap: Indirectly describe how you will support your thesis (can be part of thesis) Thesis and Introduction
Length: About 7 sentences Organization: Topic sentence, evidence, analysis (repeat the last two three times) DON”T just talk about one, then talk about the other (parallel structure) Make DIRECT comparisons, and use effective transitions Use body paragraphs to prove or support your thesis Explain, don’t just list similarities and differences (analysis) Body Paragraphs
No points can be taken off for not having a conclusion But, it is your final chance to make sure that your argument is not lost (back-up thesis?) This is your chance to show you recognize the significance of your argument (Your answer to “So What?”) Conclusion
Mini-Lecture: Early Civilizations
3. Where did the earliest civilizations form and why? • River Valleys • Nile • Tigris / Euphrates • Indus • Huang He / Yangtze • Rivers provided irrigation, drinking water, and transportation • Why not other rivers?
4. What different forms of rule did the earliest civilizations use to keep order? Egypt Divine rule; pharaoh = god; bureaucracy Mesopotamia Lugals = “Big Men;” strong armies (Assyrians); use of priests China Mandate of Heaven (Divine Right); Confucian beliefs (Social Roles) India Samsara and caste system (social institutions) )
5. What factors helped determine the social structures of various early civilizations? • Free vs. Slave (Mesopotamia especially) • Land ownership (China) • Occupation • India • Mesopotamia • Egypt • Gender
6. Explain the interconnection between geography and religion in two early civilizations. Egypt Gods controlled environment beneficial flooding = nice gods; unified religion due to geographic isolation Mesopotamia Violent floods = Angry, vengeful gods; introduction of new religions (Judaism, Zoroastrianism, etc.) due to geographic “openness” China Mandate of Heaven illustrated by natural disasters
7. Was there gender equality in early societies? If not, what prevented it? All Neolithic societies women no longer play as much of a role in food acquisition China Confucianism held women in lower status than any male; men must “protect” women India Aryan beliefs made women the equivalent to lowest caste; sati Egypt Limited protections and rights for women, but not equivalent of men (few female leaders) Mesopotamia No female “Lugals” = no legal equality for women
Summarizer: Take the last few minutes of class today to complete the exit slip activity on your daily handout. Turn your handout in to the homework bin before you leave.