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Comma & Semi-Colon Practice. Many companies make sugar-free soft drinks, which are flavored by synthetic chemicals the drinks usually contain only one or two calories per serving. Mr. Leyland played the viola professionally for many years and he now conducts a community orchestra.
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Comma & Semi-Colon Practice • Many companies make sugar-free soft drinks, which are flavored by synthetic chemicals the drinks usually contain only one or two calories per serving. • Mr. Leyland played the viola professionally for many years and he now conducts a community orchestra. • The crab grass was flourishing but the rest of the lawn, unfortunately, was dying. • The hill was covered with wildflowers, it was a beautiful sight. • As I turned around, I heard a loud thump for the cat had upset the goldfish bowl. • The artist preferred to paint in oils he did not like watercolors. • The house was clean, the table set, and the porch light on everything was ready for the guests' arrival. • He looked carefully in the underbrush but he failed to notice the pair of green eyes staring at him. • The foundations of the house had been poured but, to his disappointment, nothing else had been done because of the carpenters' strike. • The computer could perform millions of operations in a split second however, it could not think spontaneously.
Comma & Semi-Colon Practice • I thought registration day would be tiring but I didn't know I'd have to stand in so many lines. • The dog, growling and snarling, snapped at me I was so frightened that I ran. • The snowstorm dumped twelve inches of snow on the interstate subsequently, the state police closed the road. • Professors are supposed to be absent-minded and I've seen plenty of evidence to support that claim since I've been in college. • The suspect said that he had never met the victim however, the detective knew that he was lying. • In the first place, it was snowing too hard to see the road in the second place, we had no chains. • I have read Soul on Ice but I have not read The Invisible Man. • San Francisco is my favorite city in fact, I plan to spend two weeks there this summer. • The quarterback made a brilliant pass and the end crossed the goal line for the winning touchdown. • Large supermarkets fascinate me I can find everything from frozen chow mein to soybean flour in one place.
Aaron and I walked to class after eating lunch and checking our mail. • I comforted the little boy who had fallen off his bicycle. • After I baked cookies for the class, I decided to take a short nap. • It had been raining all day, so Sara put on her rain boots and splashed through the puddles. • Although I love the mountains, I prefer living at the beach because I can go swimming, and the weather is always warm.
Nora feels so distraught by Torvald’s reaction that she decides to leave home; she needs to find herself. • I brush my teeth, comb my hair, and change into pajamas every night. • I hate to run, yet I still do it because it is good exercise. • I fed the cat, and I let out the dog, and I left for work. • I rewarded myself Sunday night since I had worked hard on my project all weekend.
- A sentence tells a complete idea.- A fragment (non-sentence) tells an incomplete idea. • Read each of the following statements and decide which is a complete sentence.
Sharks are fierce hunters. • Sentence • Fragment
Afraid of sharks. • Sentence • Fragment
The great white shark will attack people. • Sentence • Fragment
Other kinds will not. • Sentence • Fragment
Sharks have an outer row of teeth for grabbing. • Sentence • Fragment
When the outer teeth fall out, another row of teeth moves up. • Sentence • Fragment
Help keep the ocean clean by eating dead animals. • Sentence • Fragment That’s good to know!
Not a single bone in his body. • Sentence • Fragment
Cartilage of sharks. • Sentence • Fragment
Made of the same material as the tip of your nose. • Sentence • Fragment
Unlike other fish, sharks cannot float. • Sentence • Fragment
In motion constantly. • Sentence • Fragment
Even when sleeping. • Sentence • Fragment
Clause • Group of words containing a subject and a verb • Independent • Dependent
Independent Clause“main clause” • A group of words made up of a subject and predicate • Simple sentence • Can stand alone as a sentence • Ex. Jim studied in the Sweet Shop for his English quiz.
Dependent Clause“subordinate clause” • Contains a subject and verb but does not express a complete thought • Cannot stand alone as a sentence • Must be attached to an independent clause • Ex: When Jim studied in the Sweet Shop for his English quiz
Grammar Practice • Write 2 SENTENCES. • Reminder: These are COMPLETE thoughts • independent (main) clauses • Write 2 dependent clauses. • contains a subject & verb • You have 5 minutes
Clauses • Dependent clause • Independent clause • Complete these dependent clauses: • Since I love football • After we leave school • If you say that one more time
The Vicious Run-on Sentence …and how to tame it.
Run-on Sentence • Has at least 2 parts • Either part can stand alone • 2 independent clauses improperly combined • The sun is high, put on some sunscreen.
How to Combine a Run-on • Comma + coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) • The sun is high, so put on sunscreen. • F • A • N • B • O • Y • S
FANBOYS Practice • Correctly combine 2+ independent clauses using 3 different FANBOYS. • You have 8 minutes
“Plagiarism Lines Blur for Students in Digital Age” *Please do not write on the article. Directions: • Read the article with your group. • Summarize it. *Reporter’s formula • Tell the main idea. *Determine the subject & what’s being said about it – NO SPECIFICS! • Find a quote to support the main idea. • Write 1 paragraph explaining why the information in this article matters.
Literary & Rhetorical Devices • Foreshadowing • Imagery • Metaphor • Extended Metaphor • Simile • Dialogue • Alliteration • Anaphora • Allusion • Allegory • Symbol • Theme • Irony • Personification • Mood • Tone • Oxymoron • Hyperbole • Rhetorical Question • Structure • Diction • Ethos • Pathos • Logos • Parallelism • Paradox • Connotation • Denotation
Ok, so what does a semi-colon do? • Links 2 independent clauses (2 complete thoughts) with no additional words
Examples • I am going home; I intend to stay there. • It rained heavily during the afternoon; we managed to have our picnic anyway. • They couldn't make it to the summit and back before dark; they decided to camp for the night.
What else can it do? • join 2 independent clauses together with a conjunctive adverb (adverbs that join independent clauses): • however • moreover • therefore • consequently • otherwise • nevertheless • thus
More Examples • I am going home; moreover, I intend to stay there. • It rained heavily during the afternoon; however, we managed to have our picnic anyway. • They couldn't make it to the summit and back before dark; therefore, they decided to camp for the night.
Correct or Incorrect? • I felt sleepy after school; I took a nap on the couch. • The prom is next month; but I don’t have a date yet. • I love pizza; wings; chocolate; and burgers. • Washington Irving is a Romantic author; however, Nathaniel Hawthorne is a Dark Romantic. • I failed English; consequently, my parents grounded me.
Semi-Colon Practice • Write 3 sentences correctly combining 2+ independent clauses with a semi-colon and NO additional words. • Write 3 sentences correctly combining 2+ independent clauses using a conjunctive adverb. You have 11 minutes
Semi-colon Formulas • main clause + ; + conjunctive adverb + , + main clause. • I love dogs; however, I like cats too. • main clause+ ;+ main clause. • I love my cat; his name is Jack.
Common Conjunctive Adverbs • accordinglyalsobesidesconsequentlyconverselyfinallyfurthermorehence howeverindeedinsteadlikewise • meanwhilemoreoverneverthelessnext nonethelessotherwisesimilarlystillsubsequentlythenthereforethus
NOT TO BE CONFUSED WITHCoordinating Conjunctions • Main clause+ , + FANBOYS + main clause. • I love my dog, and I love my cat. • For • And • Nor • But • Or • Yet • So
Corrections Correct each of the following sentences 3x. • Using JUST a semi-colon • Using the semi-colon, conjunctive adverb, comma construction • Using a comma and FANBOYS • I am sleepy I want to take a nap. • My dog ran away I cried myself to sleep. • This weekend is Halloween my costume is awesome.
The Fab Four Types of Sentences
Types of Sentences • Simple • Complex • Compound • Compound-complex
Simple • Has 1 independent (stand alone) clause • Ex. David Letterman and Jay Leno host talk shows.
Compound • Consists of 2+ independent clauses. • The independent clauses can be joined with • , + A coordinating conjunction: • for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so (FANBOYS) • A semicolon (;) • Ex. Amir is a coward, but Hassan is brave.
Complex • Contains 1 independent clause and 1+ dependent clause • Ideas are linked by subordinating conjunctions • after,how, until,although,if, unless,as, in order, that,whenas long as, whenever,as much as, now, where,as soon as,wherever,though, since,while,before, even, though, because • Ex. Although I love the mountains, I prefer the beach.
Compound-Complex • Has 2+ independent clauses and 1+ dependent clausesEx. When the heat comes, the lakes dry up, and farmers know the crops will fail. I planned to drive to work, but I couldn't until the mechanic repaired my car.