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Harvard Extension School Expo E-25; Section 12 (5:30PM-7:30PM). Instructor: Julie Anne McNary Please check your Elluminate Audio Wizard We will begin at 5:30PM. Expository Writing E25: Introduction to Academic Writing and Critical Reading Analyzing the Short Story.
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Harvard Extension SchoolExpo E-25; Section 12 (5:30PM-7:30PM) Instructor: Julie Anne McNary Please check your Elluminate Audio Wizard We will begin at 5:30PM.
Expository Writing E25: Introduction to Academic Writing and Critical ReadingAnalyzing the Short Story Online WebConference Via Elluminate SoftwareWebsite: http://isites.harvard.edu/icb/icb.do?keyword=k64023Elluminate Room:https://sas.elluminate.com/m.jnlp?sid=2007009&password=M.3163A85F45E3980D9A1F3875B7EED6
Overview • MORE Housecleaning – comments, drop box, text book, issues, most importantly, first conferences, and finally, The Writing Center; • Another call to arms… • Class Discussion and in-class writing exercise: The Things They Carried by Tim O’Brien • The Aristotelian Appeals – how can we use this material when analyzing short stories • Your rhetoric exercises • Moving from your 1.3 outline to Exercise 1.4, First Draft of Essay #1
Our Book and Chapters • ISBN #0-321-47583-6 • Chapters we’ve read so far: • 1: Reading a Story • 2. Point of View • 3. Character • 4. Setting • 5. Tone and Style • 6. Theme • 13. Writing about A Story • Chapters assigned: • 7. Symbol • 8. Evaluating a Story
The Writing Center • If you wish to discuss your work in progress with a Writing Center tutor you can send a request for an email consultation to writing_center@dcemail.harvard.edu. • Look at the Writing Center website for more information about what to include in your email: • http://www.extension.harvard.edu/2009-10/resources/writing.jsp.
Some Sample 1.2 exercises • Christine • Ruy • Timothy • Heather • Sample JAMc Comments – Stephanie
Class Discussion The Things They Carried, By Tim O’Brien
Classical Rhetoric and the Aristotelian Appeals The strategies we use when we write or speak persuasively
In Class Exercise • For the next twenty minutes, please think about one character you have read about in the various texts I have assigned in this course thus far. • If you were going to conduct a rhetorical analysis of that character, how would you go about doing so? Is that character an ethos-driven character? Does the character employ the pathetic appeal? the logical appeal?
Strong Paragraph Structure…Again • Clear, direct topic sentence that states some sort of claim; • Evidence and examples from the text that respond to and/or support that claim; • Transitions and coherent explication if you are addressing a complex claim with several points of connection; • YOUR ANALYSIS OF THAT EVIDENCE!!! • A sentence that both provides closure and helps transition into the next paragraph.
Exercise 1.4 – First Draft • Please refine and strengthen your introductory paragraph of Essay #1. Make sure to include a strong opening sentence, a quick summary of your story, your analytical question, and your thesis; • MAKE SURE TO GROUND YOUR ARGUMENT IN A CLOSE-READING OF THIS TEXT; • Then, build your body paragraphs from the outline you constructed in 1.3; • Make sure to look at your paragraph structure very, VERY carefully; • In your conclusion, feel free to expand on your thesis, perhaps even bringing your own life experience.