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Paragraph Structure. Basic Writing Section 11 04/15/13. Asian. English. Romance. Middle East. Communication Styles by Culture?. A short piece of writing that focuses on one idea. 5-7 sentences long. What is a paragraph?. Where do you like to visit in Japan?.
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Paragraph Structure Basic Writing Section 11 04/15/13
Asian English Romance Middle East Communication Styles by Culture?
A short piece of writing that focuses on one idea. • 5-7 sentences long What is a paragraph?
Where do you like to visit in Japan? I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of History. I like to visit Hiroshima because there are many rivers. I like to visit Kawaguchiko because I can see Mt. Fuji. I like to visit Tokyo Disneyland because there are many fun rides. I like to visit Tsukiji because I can eat fresh fish. Is this a paragraph? NO!
I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of history. Kyoto was Japan’s capital for many years. In the Gion district, you can hear Geisha’s play ancient Japanese music. You can also visit Kiyomizu-dera, one of the oldest temples in the city. Kyoto has a lot of history. What is this paragraph about? This is a paragraph. The history of Kyoto
Excellent paragraphs have three parts: • Topic Sentence • Supporting Sentences • Concluding Sentences Paragraph Structure
This is the main idea of your paragraph. • It introduces the topic or subjectof your paragraph • It also introduces the controlling idea, which is what you want to say about the topic. Example: Social network sites help you meet new people. Topic Sentence (TS) Topic Controlling Idea
Examples: (1) Social network sites help you meet new people. (2) Social network sites are a waste of time. (3) Cooking requires many different skills. (4) The healthiest food you can eat are vegetables. Topic Topic Topic Topic Controlling Idea Controlling Idea Controlling Idea Controlling Idea
I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of History. • I like to visit Hiroshima because there are many rivers. • I like to visit Kawaguchiko because I can see Mt. Fuji. • I like to visit Tokyo Disneyland because there are many fun rides. • I like to visit Tsukiji because I can eat fresh fish. What’s wrong with this paragraph? No Clear Topic Sentence
I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of history. Kyoto was Japan’s capital for many years. In the Gion district, you can hear Geisha’s play ancient Japanese music. You can also visit Kiyomizu-dera, one of the oldest temples in the city. Kyoto has a lot of history. What is the topic sentence of this paragraph? I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of history. Topic Controlling Idea
Supporting sentences explain the main idea. They give information. What are the supporting sentences? I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of history. Kyoto was Japan’s capital for many years. In the Giondistrict, you can hear Geisha’s play ancient Japanese music. You can also visit Kiyomizu-dera, one of the oldest temples in the city. Supporting Sentences (SS)
What are the supporting sentences? (TS) I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of history. (SS)Kyoto was Japan’s capital for many years. (SS) In the Giondistrict, you can hear Geisha’s play ancient Japanese music. (SS)You can also visit Kiyomizu-dera, one of the oldest temples in the city.
The Concluding Sentence is the last sentence of the paragraph. • It summarizes the paragraph. What is the Concluding Sentence? I like to visit Kyoto because there is a lot of history. Kyoto was Japan’s capital for many years. In the Gion district, you can hear Geisha’s play ancient Japanese music. You can also visit Kiyomizu-dera, one of the oldest temples in the city. Kyoto has a lot of historical places. Concluding Sentence (CS)
I will give you a paragraph from Reading 1 in the book. You and your partner must organize it. You are looking for: • Topic Sentence • Supporting Sentences • Concluding Sentence Put a Paragraph Together