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Final Revision day

Final Revision day. Adapted from Kelly Gallagher’s work and Mr. Kreher. Embed your quotes!. Claim Evidence Warrant

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Final Revision day

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  1. Final Revision day Adapted from Kelly Gallagher’s work and Mr. Kreher

  2. Embed your quotes! • Claim • Evidence • Warrant • One of the main messages of the play is to deflate the hubris of mankind. The Chorus boasts about humanity’s ability to overcome obstacles: “Numberless wonders / terrible wonders walk the world but none the match for man” (376 – 377).However, this acts as a warning to how man’s strength can become his weakness.

  3. Embed • Lowest level • She says, “QUOTE” (). • Medium level • Dr. Geid suggests that teenagers need more than eight hours of sleep: “QUOTE” (). • Highest level • Dr. Geid suggests that teenagers receive “ideally 9 hours of sleep” () to perform at their best daily.

  4. Self & Peer Edit

  5. Rob McBobber Mrs. Bannecker English 3 – 1sthr 28 April 2014 Caught in the Act: The ACT in Review His heart pounds heavily, sweat drips from his face, and countless thoughts storm through his head while he struggles to even grip his pencil. His eyes then wonder around the room and everyone appears to be completely composed. Finally, the five-minute warning is called and he begins to have a panic attack. Each year, juniors all across the country register for the ACT, a national college admission exam. Students and their families invest money in practice tests, tutors, classes, and other resources to help prepare for the actual assessment. Is it all worth it? Well, the exam certainly has a number of benefits, including its ability to show one’s potential and its aptitude to evaluate every student in America on a standard-based scale. However, the ACT should not be taken into consideration by colleges because its detriments outweigh its benefits.

  6. Format Friend • MLA heading? • Double spaced everything? • Interesting title? • Book titles are italicized! Articles are in “quotations” • Evidence: Setup quotation, “Quote”(lastname 23). • 3.5 – 4 pages? • Works Cited page? (easybib.com or ottobib.com)

  7. Precise Language • Remember those “tired” words we talked about earlier in the semester? • Read your essay and mark any of these words that appear. In your revision, make these words more precise. Good Nice Pretty Beautiful Fine A lot Bad Thing Really Very Terrible Wonderful

  8. STAR

  9. Answer questions • What do you need the most help fixing? • What do YOU need to do to get a better grade on this assignment?

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