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Use detailed descriptions to paint a picture of what you see and do with words. Explain words that may be unfamiliar. Let your personality shine through!. One Day in the Life Project How are we alike? How are we different?. Profile Writing Tips. First Draft
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Use detailed descriptions to paint a picture of what you see and do with words. Explain words that may be unfamiliar. Let your personality shine through! One Day in the Life Project How are we alike? How are we different? Profile Writing Tips
First Draft Title: My morning Message: I get up at the last minute, get ready, then I have to rush to school. On my way, I pick up some coffee and a bite to eat at Lulu’s. One Day in the Life Project How are we alike? How are we different? Early Morning Getting To School
After Revision Title: I’m not a morning person Message: I drag myself out of bed each morning at 5:15 AM to let my dogs out and get ready for school. I try not to wake my husband who sleeps in. If I’m lucky to remember the night before, I have my clothes ironed and ready to go. I take a shower, brush my teeth, then get dressed, and style my hair. I grab all my supplies for school and drive my car about 30 minutes. (continued…) One Day in the Life Project How are we alike? How are we different? Early Morning Getting To School
(continued…) On my way, I stop at my favorite local coffee shop, Lulu’s Electric Café, for a coffee and a scone. Scones are a buttery English tea biscuit full of fruits like peaches or blueberries. I eat in my car to avoid being stuck behind all the buses when they arrive with the students. It takes forever to get into the school property if I have to wait behind 15 or more buses! One Day in the Life Project How are we alike? How are we different? Early Morning - Getting To School