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Effective Narration. Taken from Seeing the Pattern Kathleen T. McWhorter. Narratives Make a Point. Event or series of events portrayed Writer’s thinking changes About self About world Epiphany shown Point (your thesis) directly stated implied. Narratives Present a Conflict.
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Effective Narration Taken from Seeing the Pattern Kathleen T. McWhorter Thanks to B-T and Pomerantz
Narratives Make a Point • Event or series of events portrayed • Writer’s thinking changes • About self • About world • Epiphany shown • Point (your thesis) • directly stated • implied
Narratives Present a Conflict • Reveals a struggle, question, or problem • Works toward its resolution • Can be internal or external
Narratives Create Tension • Tension suspense created as the story unfolds • how will the conflict be resolved? • Climax the point just before (or as) the conflict is resolved
Narratives Sequence Events • Chronologicalorder • Flashbackreturns to events that took place in the past • Flashforwardjumps ahead in time • Foreshadowinghints at events that will happen in the future
Narratives Incorporate Dialogue • Reveals character • Builds tension • Emphasizes conflict
Dialogue Should be Natural Stiff and Unrealistic • Eva said to her grandmother, “The stories you tell of your childhood in Mexico are very interesting. I wish I could go there with you.” • Eva told her grandmother, “I love the stories about Mexico when you were a kid. I wish I could go there with you.” More Natural
Narratives Are Told from a Point of View • 1st I, my, me • Personal • Direct to Audience • Feelings and Commentary • 3rd he, she, his, her, him her • Distance • Objective • Insights not available to protagonist
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