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Work In Progress. By Christopher Reynolds, Elliott Shepherd and Tim smith. We aim to produce one episode of eight; of a radio drama that will be aired on woman’s hour at 10:45am and repeated at 7:45pm . Our main storyline focuses on the relationship between a father and his daughter. Aim.
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Work In Progress By Christopher Reynolds, Elliott Shepherd and Tim smith
We aim to produce one episode of eight; of a radio drama that will be aired on woman’s hour at 10:45am and repeated at 7:45pm . Our main storyline focuses on the relationship between a father and his daughter. Aim
Anne is a primary schoolteacher and mother of two. Her mother calls her urgently, about her farther having an accident and how he has broken his hip. Anne resents this as we discover she doesn’t have a good relationship with him. When arriving at his bedside at his home Stan asks Anne to write his memoirs. After agreeing to do this Stan reveals secrets that Anne never imagined he had. Each episode looks at different parts of Stan’s life and helps to build on the relationship between farther and daughter. Proposal
Anne working at School • Anne at Bar with friends • Anne on phone with Mary • Anne in Car • Front of house • Anne going through the house with Mary • In Stan’s room • Narrative of how Stan first met Mary at college in the mid 50’s Structure
Classroom – ringing bell, noise of children, teacher shouting, footsteps • Bar – phones ringing, background talking, people drinking, chairs moving, laughter, glass • Car – engine starting, door noises, getting in and out of the car • House – doorbell, doors creaking, footsteps, grandfather clock, people going up the stair, TV on and turning off, movements in bed • Flashback – mid 50’s music, sounds that help keep the narrative interesting Sounds
Informing and Entertaining Women • Radio 4 • 30+ Women • Housewives • “Classic and contemporary original drama and book dramatisations” • Editor Jill Burridge says: ‘Forty-two per cent of our audience is male and we have a significant amount of student listeners – 10am is often a wake-up time for them. There are also a lot of young women on maternity leave who want the company and stimulation of a programme which informs, entertains and challenges them.’ Target Audience
Radio 4 • Weekday’s 10-11am, Saturdays 4-5pm • First 45minutes of the show consists of reports, interviews, education, debates and cultural and political topics that are aimed at women and mothers. • Last 15 minutes consist of a drama Woman’s Hour
Anne – 40 year old daughter • Stan – 75 year old farther to Anne – Tony Feilding-Raby – 63 year old actor has done many student dramas before. • Mary – 65 year old wife to Stan Actors
The average age of someone who fractures their hip is 80 years. • http://healthcareupdates.com/2008/04/09/dealing-with-a-fractured-hip/ • Too many daughters regret not having gotten to know their father very well while he was still alive. • http://www.parentingbookmark.com/pages/LN01.htm Factual Research
Woman’s hour • Radio 4 • Murder of the parents daughter and how they are coping • Very simple but interesting story • Well acted – good interaction between the characters – can tell whos who easily – can tell if they are in the background • Not many sounds – footsteps, phone calls, answering phone • Narrator – police woman – helps story to move forward A Small Town Murder
Auchestral Intro • Noices – car door, phone, diary, cow, oven • Quite upbeat fiendly has same themes as ‘Emmerdale’ • Emotions a bit over the top – e.g. tuting and sighing • Have to have lisetenid before to understand the story • Each scene around 2/3 minutes long • Every day lives – going to work, cooking dinner • Each scene is normally between two characters • Every character has a distinct voice and personality to tell them apart form each other Archers – Henry’s Coming Home
Woman’s hour • Catherin compares her life to her mothers and feels down • Diary narrative • Dying of cancer – downbeat and dark • About coping with old age and its illnesses that it brings • Letter form her mother – flashback about her dad going crazy from war • Cherishes her visits from Becca • Again not more than two characters in each scene lasting about 2/3minutes each. Writing the Century – 3 women across the century
Afternoon Reading • Post apocalyptic scene • Narrative upbeat – sounded like a children’s story • Emily goes shopping for Chris • Tempo keeps changing from upbeat to downbeat • All narrative • Basically about their struggles in this new world Travelling Light - Shopping
Radio 7 • Robert Neville – last man on Earth against vampires • All narration – American • Like an audio book • Trying to find a cure for this curse • Same pace throughout • Religious views – scared of the cross • Torments of being alone by yourself • Atmospheric music at the end of the episode but none anywhere else I am Legend – Episode 6
Monologue – female actress • Descriptions of the surroundings and flat are very good • Narrator describes a girl in a lot of detail Afternoon Reading (ES)
Story starts with a monologue • Talk about the past • The woman has cancer • Real life problems • Goes back to the past 1916 • Puts an image in your mind to help you imagine the scene • Characters – old, different accents make it easier to tell them apart • Audience 24-35 Woman’s Hour Drama (ES)
Starts with music • Sound effects – phone ringing • Music when switching scenes • Pauses to change to different scenes • Different characters in most of the different scenes • Characters have personal stories • Different accents help you to understand what is going on • Audience 30-40 The Archers (ES)
Amy – New York – Red Hair – stereotypical • Characters – effective, professional, each one has their own personality • Sounds – planes • Cuts in and out of flashbacks and present time • Music in the background – ambient • Sound – creates an atmosphere • Story is real life problems – family – children, romance, marriage • Happy ending despite problems she faces throughout • Audience – adults 35-45+ Prenup (ES)
Story – starts with music and a narrator taking about her husband’s funeral • Flashbacks to when she was younger with her husband – loads of flashbacks • Forgotten most of her life but remembers her most valuable memories. • Alzheimer’s disease • 50’s music • In an old peoples home • Characters –individual, old • Sounds – ‘Bargain Hunt’ on tv – music from early 30’s and 40’s – used in flashbacks returning back to the era. Note To Self (ES)
We aim to achieve an original and entertaining 14minute radio drama that reaches out to females aged 30 and over • Dealing with real life issues such as relationships between family members • This would be aired between the hours of 10:45am and repeated at 7:45pm during the ‘Woman’s hour’. • Studio 1 booked out for Monday 7th February 11am – 6pm • Actors booked for the same time Conclusion