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What do all of these sentences have in common?. Ashamed , I was frozen . (139) Awake , I ran after Roger, but he dunked it before I was even close . (139) Bleeding and angry, I glared at the crowd . (145). Why is that better than writing…. I was frozen when I was ashamed.
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What do all of these sentences have in common? • Ashamed, I was frozen.(139) • Awake, I ran after Roger, but he dunked it before I was even close. (139) • Bleeding and angry, I glared at the crowd. (145)
Why is that better than writing… • I was frozen when I was ashamed. • I was frozen and ashamed. • I suddenly woke up and ran after Roger, but he dunked it before I was even close. • When I was glaring at the crowd, I was bleeding and angry.
Write your own! Remember to start your sentence with an adjective, followed by a comma, and then say what you were doing. _________________, I ____________________. (adjective) (verb phrase)