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Writing Your College Admissions Essay

Writing Your College Admissions Essay. Also called a Personal Statement An essay that helps the college admissions board better understand who you are Focuses on who you are vs. what you’ve done. What is a College Admissions Essay?. A resumé or list of what you’ve done.

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Writing Your College Admissions Essay

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  1. Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  2. Also called a Personal Statement • An essay that helps the college admissions board better understand who you are • Focuses on who you are vs. what you’ve done What is a College Admissions Essay?

  3. A resumé or list of what you’ve done What a College Admissions Essay is NOT

  4. Challenging classes (AP/Honors/College Classes) Good grades Good test scores (ACT/SAT) Demonstration of leadership/initiative Community service Work or out-of-school experiences (demonstrates responsibility, dedication, and maturity) Well written admissions essay Good letters of recommendation (integrity/skills/character) Supplementary recommendations Things that make you stand out (honors/awards/talents/experiences) Top 10 Things Colleges Look For in a High School Student

  5. Sample Essay

  6. Sample Essay

  7. Discuss the strengths of the previous essay. Table Talk

  8. Comments from a College Advisor

  9. Read and follow directions carefully. • Answer all parts of the writing prompt. • Adhere to word count limits. • UC system = 1,000 words for 2 essays • Approximately 750 words for one essay • About 2 typed pages (1 inch margins, double-spaced) • Approximately 250 words for the other essay • About ¾ typed page (1 inch margins, double-spaced) Follow Directions

  10. Bloopers From College Essays • If there was a single word to describe me, that word would be “profectionist” • I was abducted into the national honor society • I want to be bilingual in three or more languages • I would love to attend a college where the foundation was built on women

  11. Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. Prompt #2 Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are? UC Writing Prompts

  12. Start Early. Leave plenty of time to revise, reword, and rewrite. Have others read your essay and give input. Wait several days after drafting your essay to reread it and begin revision. You will see errors that you didn’t see while drafting it in the first place. Try reading your essay aloud or reading it backwards from the last sentence to the first. This will help make the errors stand out. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  13. Read the directions and writing prompt carefully. Address the writing prompt completely. Pay attention to words limits. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  14. Be honest about yourself and write from the heart. Make sure your personality is coming through. Don’t simply write what you think others want to hear. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  15. Focus on your strengths. Think of the essay like it’s a personal interview. Focus more on who you are than what you’ve done. This is not a résumé. Don’t list everything you already listed on your application. Your experiences are important, but let the focus be on how those experiences have shaped who you are. How have these experiences helped you demonstrate creativity, tenacity, self-discipline, motivation, leadership, volunteerism, intellectual achievement, sincerity, a good work ethic, etc. Write about a few of these. Also discuss any talents you have. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  16. Take a risk. “The danger lies not in writing a bad essay but in writing a common essay-the ones that admission officers are going to read dozens of,” says Scott Anderson, associate director of college counseling at Mercersburg Academy, P.A. Avoid clichés and trite statements. Don’t try to be too witty, too opinionated, or too intellectual. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  17. If you have hardships (financial struggles, personal setbacks, etc.), discuss how you have overcome them. How have you grown from the experience(s)? Avoid “The Four Ds” (Death, Drugs, Drinking, and Depression) Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  18. Show, don’t tell. In your personal essay you want to avoid making overt statements about your character such as “I’m a great person” or “I’m responsible, hardworking, intelligent, caring, creative, and a leader.” Your goal is to show your qualities in the form of a story, not merely in a list. Let the reader conclude that you are wonderful without actually saying it. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  19. Come up with a catchy first sentence to get the reader’s attention. If it grabs the reader’s attention, the reader will be encouraged to read on. Tips For Writing Your College Admissions Essay

  20. Personal Inventory

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