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PUT YOURSELF IN THE PLACE OF… A Hunted Fox USING DETAIL. Imagine that you are a fox being chased by a pack of hounds. What thoughts are going through your head? There are four major obstacles you must get through before you can escape. - I crossed a field - I ran through a thicket
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PUT YOURSELF IN THE PLACE OF…A Hunted FoxUSING DETAIL Imagine that you are a fox being chased by a pack of hounds. What thoughts are going through your head? There are four major obstacles you must get through before you can escape. -I crossed a field -I ran through a thicket -I crossed a stream - I crossed a busy road
For each of the four obstacles you must include at least ten details (including details of feelings) This paragraph has been broken up to show the separate details in it. 1.I ran into a patch of thick bushes.2.I could hear the dogs getting closer 3.Brambles snagged at my coat. 4.Thin branches whipped against my eyes. 5.“Keep running,” I thought.6.My feet slipped on the wet leaves. 7.At one point I tripped on a root8.and fell against the rotting body of a rat. 9.A shiver ran up my spine,10. “that might be me in a short time,” I thought.
Please write in sentences and paragraphs at all times and take care over your spelling. Each stage of the chase should be a separate paragraph.The dogs have big teeth; remember to describe how terrified you are.