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Sabin Environmental Prize. Application Workshop February 6, 2009. A good application will. Describe the idea / opportunity Explain how you will execute on it. Sabin Criteria. Market Assessment Customer (demand) appeal Environmental Benefit Innovative Feasibility Team Financials.
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Sabin Environmental Prize Application Workshop February 6, 2009
A good application will • Describe the idea / opportunity • Explain how you will execute on it
Sabin Criteria • Market Assessment • Customer (demand) appeal • Environmental Benefit • Innovative • Feasibility • Team • Financials
A Good Application • Is as important as the idea itself This is all the judges will see
Quality is Critical > Exciting or unique content > Thorough -- thought about details > Well written – easy to understand
This is NOT a Research Report Avoid an application that is: • Too academic or technical • Dense, hard to read, hard to follow • Too long You can stand out – with a clear, concise, easy to read application
Most Student Writing Too academic • Long-winded – to use up space • Long words – to impress professors • Too technical – to daze and confuse?
The Judges have Day Jobs! Consider your Audience: They want applications: • With relevant information • Concise • Easy to read • Quick to read
The Judges have Day Jobs! Consider your Audience: They do not want: • Really long term papers • With lots of repetition • Dense paragraphs • And tons of footnotes
Lots of Foot Notes Things to Avoid Don’t do this: Do this: According to a 2003 study by Euromonitor, more than 50% of women would pay more for comfortable high heeled shoes. More than 50% of women would pay more for comfortable high heeled shoes.1 [1] Euromonitor report on Footwear in the USA. June 2003.
Using Lots of Acronyms & Jargon Things to Avoid The best strategy is to file a PMA application after receiving an OUS indication. Then complete an IDE study and submit the PMA to the FDA. Huh??
Imbedding Links into the Text Things to Avoid According to a report http://www.nytimes.com/2009/02/01/us/politics/01assess.html , the new stimulus plan will not work.
Unsubstantiated Hype For Good Writing – Leave out “ Paradigm Shift Inc will revolutionize the industry with its game changing strategies.” • Why should I believe you? • What does this even mean? Huh?
Avoid Verbs in Passive Voice • Academic writing disease “ The dog was seen by Jane. ” “ Jane saw the dog. ” Avoid Passive Verbs
Application Format One page Executive Summary Aim for a main body of 12 – 15 pages Appendices for extra data Must have -- great writing Easy to read Easy to understand
Good Writing -- Keep It Simple • Short words • Short sentences • Short paragraphs
No one can read micro fonts and if you use them, no one will read your Report Style, Fonts and Format • Use same layout style, margins throughout • Use same font -- Times Roman or Arial • Use big font size -- Arial 12 or Times 13, etc. Use Big Fonts
Break Up Dense Text Use bullet point lists • Smart • Lucky • Rich • Famous Use Charts
Good Things • Numbers! Quotes! Sources! • Details -- explain what you mean • Short words, sentences, paragraphs • Bulleted lists • Pictures, graphs, simple tables • Relevant research
A good application • Describes the idea / opportunity • Explains how you will execute on it
One Page Executive Summary • What is your idea? • How big is the opportunity? • Uniqueness -- what is special? • What is the environmental benefit • Team -- experience & Yale connection
The Market Assessment How large is it ? Is it growing ? By how much ? What are the gaps, needs, opportunities ? 23
Caution: Look at the Right Market! The U.S. tent market -- is $100 million We make: high-end, hiking tents In 5 years, we will ship $5 million in tents We only need 5% of the market, right ? 24
Wrong! $5 million in sales = 50 % of market, not 5 % 25
Another Example GreenCleaning.com will sell all brands of environmentally friendly cleaning products – on one website. Cleaning product sales in the US were $28 billion in 2008.
GreenCleaning’s Market • Green cleaning products • Say, 5% of all cleaning products • $1.4 billion • Sell them (not make them) • Say, for a 10% commission $140 million - not $28 billion!
Non-profit Market Size • People helped • Costs avoided • Lives saved Use data, numbers!
Research the “Demand Appeal” • Who are the customers? • Demographics? • How many are there? • What do they want? • What can you do for them? Find out!
The Product -- or the Service Develop a “strawman” -- one page • What does it do ? • How does it work ? • List the main features • List main benefits -- to customers
Use the Product Description to: • Conduct interviews • Do surveys • Ask customers if they want your product !
Find Out: > Do they like your product ? > Will they buy/use it when it is ready ? > What price will they pay ? > Do they have any issues / concerns ?
Interviews • Make up a questionnaire • Send in advance -- or bring with you • Take good notes • Do as many as you can
Surveys • Survey Monkey = online survey product • Easy, nice looking • Includes analysis tools • Free for short, simple surveys • Keep your survey short, simple • Test your survey before sending!
For Your Application • Describe customer • Include secondary research data • Quote yourinterviews • Present your survey data
What is Innovative? How is your idea – unique? What is different from the competition? How is it different – from alternatives? 36
The Competition Who are the competitors ? How do they compete ? How are you different ? 37
What is Innovative? Always more competition - than you think Compare major features of your product > To all competitors’ products > To doing things “the old way” 38
Beware the Status Quo People hate to change Or to pay -- for what was free 39
If your Grid Looks like this…. X X X X X X X X Buyer has no reason to switch -- probably won’t 41
Key Avenues For Investigation • Why has no one done this before ? • Technology didn’t exist? • New regulations or incentives? • It won’t work for some reason….?
The Product • Fresh farmed tilapia fillets • “Seafood Safe” and Organic • 100% organic feed • Purified and filtered re-circulated water
Market Drivers - over 3 years: • US seafood consumption up 12% - $12 billion • US tilapia consumption up 110% - $400 million • Demand for organic meat & fish up 120% Over 70% of Americans would by organic seafood if available; 60% ‘strongly prefer’ domestic
Customers • Suppliers of restaurants, grocery & fish stores • Also, Trader Joe’s, Whole Foods
Talking to customers: • 450 chefs and 150 retailers • Majority prefer environmentally responsible fish • Local restaurant owner: “customers care” • Distributor: “Not enough good farms”
Competition • 96% of tilapia – imported, mostly frozen, not organic • Most US farm-raised – small, not organic The Good Fish tilapia will be more expensive vs. competitors
Sabin Workshop Feasibility
A good application will • Describe the idea / opportunity • Explain how you will execute on it