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Section E PSWS Street Hawkers. Loretta Wong , an Administrative Assistant with the Environment Hygiene Branch of the Urban Council Your boss, Mr Sam Chu asked you to complete three tasks. Situation.
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Loretta Wong , an Administrative Assistant with the Environment Hygiene Branch of the Urban Council Your boss, Mr Sam Chu asked you to complete three tasks Situation
Aims : state the position of the Urban Council about the policy regarding illegal street hawkers Reference : date file p.1-5 Structure: Para. 1 : (7%) general overview of the UC’s responsibilities regarding hawkers the use of hawker control teams the use of hawker control officers Task 1 : newspaper article
Para. 2 (4%) outline the progress in controlling illegal hawkers Quote some relevant statistics from the UC Annual Report Para. 3(10%) Explain why the UC wants to discontinue the Itinerant Hawkers Licence by the middle of next year Report the progress to date Para. 4 Conclusion (3%) ***** The tone should be emphatic & formal***** Content points (24) Language (4) Stance (3) Organization (3) = 34
A survey of public opinion about street hawkers Draw appropriate conclusions Make suitable recommendations Reference: date file p. 6 Task 2 Report
In writing the findings , effort should be made to vary the sentence structure as much as possible, and to avoid including too many figures The conclusions should be drawn from the findings The recommendations should be based on the conclusions, and should best be expressed in infinitive verb forms. Notes to Task 2
Street hawkers are widely patronized by the public, and add color and life to society. However, there is concern about …… To legalize and bring under government control all street hawkers, and to increase efforts to improve hygiene standard of those selling food. Content points (16) Language (3) Succinctness (2) Suggested conclusions & Recommendations
Reply letter to Mr. Sin Contents : Plan to redevelop the Hawkers Bazaar in Yee On Street Road safety problem is a matter for the police Investigations on health nuisance ( noise & hygiene) Provide hotline regarding hygiene matters Supply facts on convictions for illegal hawkers Closing Task 3 Reply Letter