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TSA Writing Skills (Primary 6). Pre-writing. Read the question. Text type. John is writing his diary about a new classmate in his class. You are John. Complete the diary in about 80 words. The following questions may help you. What to write. Situation. Number of words.
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Read the question Text type John is writing his diary about a new classmate in his class. You are John. Complete the diary in about 80 words. The following questions may help you. What to write Situation Number of words Underline the key words
Brainstorm ideas(1) Pictures ? reading surfing ? ? dancing
From the pictures, find out: • Who is the new classmate? • What does he look like? • What does he like doing? • How do you feel about him? • Can you think of any other ideas?
Brainstorm ideas(2) Mind map • Think of as many ideas about this new classmate as possible • Sometimes there may be a mind map to tell you what you can write about
(2) Mind map 12 years old Main ideas reading Name: Henry surfing short hair likes doing A new classmate feel about him dancing ? good student Other ideas Supporting details
What: the thing or action When: the time Where: the place Who: the people Why: the reason … How: the way something happens How many: the number of something How much: the price … Brainstorm ideas(3) Question words • Use ‘wh-’ words and ‘how’ question words to brainstorm ideas of different areas, e.g.
(3) Question words • Henry • 12 • short hair, big eyes • reading, surfing and dancing • good • Who (is the new classmate)? • How (old is he)? • What (does he look like)? • What (does he like doing?) • How (do you feel about him)?
(1) Topic sentences I have a new classmate in my class. His name is Henry and he is 12 years old. He has short hair and big eyes. He is happy in this new school. We often have lunch together and we become close friends. I like reading and so is he. He is a good student. A topic sentence is usually put at the beginningof a paragraph. Use topic sentence to tell the main idea of a paragraph
(2) Supporting details I have a new classmate in my class. His name is Henry and he is 12 years old. He has short hair and big eyes. He is happy in this new school. We often have lunch together and we become close friends. I like reading and so is he. He is a good student. Details about this new classmate Write more details under the main idea
(2) Supporting details After class, he always does what he likes to do. He likes surfing in the sea. He also likes dancing. He dances very well! Later I will join him to learn how to play chess and have fun together. Here are some vocabulary about activities. Use relevant vocabulary items
(2) Supporting details I have a new classmate in my class. His name is Henry and he is 12 years old. He has short hair and big eyes. He is happy in this new school. We often have lunch together and we become close friends. I like reading and so is he. He is a good student. Use adjectives to describe how Henry looks and the writer’s feeling towards him. Use more adjectives
(3) Linking ideas After class, he always does what he likes to do. He likes surfing in the sea. He also likes dancing. He dances very well! Later I will join him to learn how to play chess and have fun together. Use connectives to link up ideas
More connectives • Cause: because, since, as • Addition: and, too, also, besides • Contrast: but, however, yet, on the other hand • Purpose: in order to, so as to • Result: therefore, as a result • Sequence: first, then, after that, finally, later Connectives can link up short sentences and make the paragraph looks more natural
(1) Story Beginning • introduce the setting and the characters • Development • Introduce the plot / problem • Climax • the most important or exciting part • Ending • the problem is usually solved
(2) Diary Date • What happened • How you feel and think
(3) Informal letter Date Recipient • Opening • Main body • Ending Closing Sender
(4) Email Recipient • Opening • Main body • Ending Closing Sender
(5) Article Introduction • introduce the topic • Main body • main idea 1 + supporting details • main idea 2 + supporting details • main idea 3 + supporting details • Conclusion • sum up the ideas • give your view
Read again • Take 5-10 minutes to read your writing again • Check the language (grammar) - tenses - spelling • Check the format (especially letters) • Check the number of words (about 80 words)