Ambiguous and Vague Pronoun Reference

1. Ambiguous and Vague Pronoun Reference What the heck are you talking about?

2. rule number: 30 • It must be clear to the reader what noun the pronoun is referring to in a sentence. • Albert told Oscar he’d bought the wrong book. (which guy purchased the wrong book?) • Cindy was going to pick up the baby, but then she fell asleep. (who fell asleep?) • I was very busy last week; it is better this week. (what is it?)

3. Avoid Ambiguous Pronoun Reference • A pronoun refers to the nearest (previous) noun, even though the nearest noun may not be the real antecedent. • Ambiguous: • Remove the wrappers from the boxes, and then discard them. • (Discard the boxes or the wrappers?) Clear: Discard the wrappers after you remove them from the boxes.

4. Avoid Vague Pronoun Reference • This occurs when a pronoun refers to a general idea or thing instead of a specific noun. Vague: They say more rain is on the way. (Who are they?) Clear: The weather bureau says more rain is on the way. Vague: Last week, I had three tests and a book report due. It was much better this week. (what is it?) Clear: Last week, I had three tests and a book report due. My schedule was much better this week.

5. Practice Rewrite/Restate each sentence correcting the ambiguous or vague pronoun reference. • 1. The team has won every game this season and we think it’s terrific. • 2. When Eric spoke to his girlfriend’s father, he was very polite. • 3. Remove the door from the frame, and paint it. • 4. I sent in three box tops and the answer to the riddle. That could win the contest. • 5. Take the socks off your feet, and wash them. • 6. Many people disapproved of the candidate’s political ideas, and it cost him the election. • 7. Peggy liked the prom dress in the store window, which she bought. • 8. Rick could dance, sing, and play the violin. The judges awarded him first prize in • the talent show for this.