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Good Writers Make Purposeful Stylistic Choices. Style:. The way that different factors come together in a piece of writing. Style can be displayed through use of:. Voice or Persona : the reader’s impression of the writer projected from the page. What’s My Style?.
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Style: • The way that different factors come together in a piece of writing.
Style can be displayed through use of: • Voice or Persona: the reader’s impression of the writer projected from the page.
Identify the Style of this poem: • From childhood's hour I have not beenAs others were; I have not seenAs others saw; I could not bringMy passions from a common spring.From the same source I have not takenMy sorrow; I could not awakenMy heart to joy at the same tone;And all I loved, I loved alone. By: Edgar Allan Poe
What is the writer’s voice/persona here? • When I walk in the spot, this is what I see, okEverybody stops and they staring at meI got a passion in my pants and I ain't afraid to show it, show it, show it, show itI'm sexy and I know it [x2]When I'm at the mall, security just can't fight them offWhen I'm at the beach, I'm in a Speedo trying to tan my cheeks (what)This is how I roll, come on ladies it's time to goWe headed to the bar, baby don't be nervousNo shoes, no shirt, and I still get service (watch)Girl look at that body [x3]I work outGirl look at that body [x3]I work out
Inflated Voice Versus Natural Voice: For most college assignments you should use your natural speaking voice to give your writing a conversational, academic style. By “natural,” we mean that you should use a voice that tries to be plain and clear while retaining the quality of a person who is enthusiastic about the subject. Trying to imitate a dense academic style can seem pretentiously stilted and phony – what we call “inflated voice.”
In your natural voice don’t be afraid to… • Use a thesaurus…it’s good to try out words like “substantiate” instead of “prove” or “chronicle” instead of “write.” Even a wrong choice is a learning experience. • Write authoritatively about what you know and admit what you don’t know. • Limit each sentence to only one idea…the inclusion of too much material in a sentence sounds rambling or disjointed. • Get someone else’s help. Using a quote or paraphrasing an expert can give you the material you need to confidently express what it is you’re trying to say.