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Editing Leads. Be extra careful with first sentence and paragraph. These are the places where uncaught errors are especially noticeable to readers. Tip One. Make sure the focus – the hard news, the point of the story – is in the lead. Tip Two.
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Be extra careful with first sentence and paragraph. These are the places where uncaught errors are especially noticeable to readers.
Tip One • Make sure the focus – the hard news, the point of the story – is in the lead
Tip Two • Make sure no unsupported questions are raised in the leads
Tip 3 • Don’t hype leads. Don’t overstate or oversensationalize the facts. • Also, watch for self-serving sources who try to make themselves look big by hyping the facts
Tip Four • Present the main facts without the lead being so crammed that readers choke on information
Tip Five • Watch for DULLNESS
Tip Six • Second-day leads: Make sure new angle to the story is in the lead. But make sure that high in the story the reporter repeated the details of the event (first day news)