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Utah Write Revision Practice

Utah Write Revision Practice. Remember:. Intro: Hook Map thesis Body: Topic Sentence Evidence Commentary Evidence Commentary Transitional statement. Remember:. Conclusion: Thesis Map Hook. Checklist:. Vivid verbs Sentence length and variation Overall length 6 paragraphs

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Utah Write Revision Practice

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  1. Utah Write Revision Practice

  2. Remember: • Intro: • Hook • Map • thesis • Body: • Topic Sentence • Evidence • Commentary • Evidence • Commentary • Transitional statement

  3. Remember: • Conclusion: • Thesis • Map • Hook

  4. Checklist: • Vivid verbs • Sentence length and variation • Overall length • 6 paragraphs • Counter argument • Spelling/Grammar

  5. Revise: • I don't think that the school day should be longer. Then the students would have no time to do homework and do stuff that they want to do. Students would be robbed of their childhood and being young. They would not be able to have any fun at all. I disagree with making the school day longer. Then kids would be in school a lot longer and we would have a shorter summer and a longer school year.

  6. Revise: • I disagree on parents forgetting from being young.Well I have five reasons on why parents don't forget on being young one by telling my mom.She said that she had a great time and that stuff were not that exspensive.Then I told my dad he said was not that great cause he lived in Mexico and things were pretty rough. • Now I tell my other relatives and some say that it was great and some say its was pretty rough.Second why parents don't forget being young is on my opinion I would think that parents do not forget on being young because I asked a lot of people and I am not going to name them all because there are a lot of people I asked . • Third reason why is because I have photos of my mom and the rest of my family.My mom has photos of her when she was little,and all my other relatives except my dad.All the photos I seen were pictures of my family were like black and white because my parents lived back in the 1960s.Mostly my mom remembers most of her young child life back then.

  7. Revise: • Have you ever tried community service? Well, even if you haven't you might real soon because your principal is considering having all students do at least 10 hours of community service do remain enrolled for next year. I personal agree with the principal for several strong reasons which include: It would help build student's character, and although there are special conditions for some students the benefits are amazing for all who do community service.

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