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Day 1. “The Open Window” by Saki. It is a funny story. Saki is the pen name of H H Munro. Correction of sentence fragment. Use of precise adjective to improve style. Use of periods with initials. Day 1. “The Open Window” by Saki is a humorous story. Correction of sentence fragment
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Day 1 “The Open Window” by Saki. It is a funny story. Saki is the pen name of H H Munro. Correction of sentence fragment Use of precise adjective to improve style Use of periods with initials
Day 1 “The Open Window” by Saki is a humorous story. Correction of sentence fragment Use of precise adjective to improve style Saki is the pen name of H. H. Munro. Use of periods with initials
Day 2 Do you know the names of the characters in “The Open Window?” One character is Framton Nuttel, who, on the advise of his doctor, goes to the country to rest. Correction of commonly confused words Streamlining sentence with use of possessive Correct placement of question mark with quotation marks
Day 2 Do you know the names of the characters in “The Open Window”? Correct placement of question mark with quotation marks One character is Framton Nuttel, who, on his doctor's advice, goes to the country to rest. Streamlining sentence with use of possessive Correction of commonly confused words
Day 3 While he is at the home of Mrs. Sappleton framton meets a young lady. Mrs. Sappleton’s niece is a self possessed young lady. Use of hyphen with the prefix self- Use of comma after introductory subordinate clause Capitalization of a person’s name
Day 3 While he is at the home of Mrs. Sappleton, Framton meets a young lady. Use of comma after introductory subordinate clause Capitalization of a person’s name Mrs. Sappleton’s niece is a self-possessed young lady. Use of hyphen with the prefix self-
Day 4 You may wonder said the niece why we keep that window wide open on an October afternoon. The niece tells Framton a outlandish story. Correct use of indefinite article Use of quotation marks in a split quotation Use of commas with a split quotation
Day 4 “You may wonder,” said the niece, “why we keep that window wide open on an October afternoon.” Use of quotation marks in a split quotation Use of commas with a split quotation The niece tells Framton an outlandish story. Correct use of indefinite article
Day 5 As I read the story, I felt like I was actually in Mrs. Sappleton’s home. The end of the story was real hilarious. Use of adverb to modify adjective Correct subordinating conjunction Use of verb in the subjunctive mood
Day 5 As I read the story, I felt as if I were actually in Mrs. Sappleton’s home. Correct subordinating conjunction Use of verb in the subjunctive mood The end of the story wasreallyhilarious. Use of adverb to modify adjective