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EW2-047, Jihye Lee, Class Review for Nov, 19th, 2015
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Class Review EW2-047 14010695 Jihye Lee
CONTENTS 01 Extra & Necessary Information Writing our examples 02 Opinion Paragraph 03 04 Reference
Extra & Necessary Information Ex) Children shouldn’t play the video game, Grand Theft Auto. ☞ Children shouldn’t play the video game, Grand Theft Auto, which teaches criminal behavior. Children shouldn’t play video games. ☞ Children shouldn’t play video games which teach criminal behavior.
Extra & Necessary Information Ex) Rachel Kingsley is a bad parent. ☞ Rachel Kingsley, who uses drug, is a bad parent. A person is a bad parent. ☞ A person who uses drug is a bad parent. With extra information, I have better understanding of why With necessary information, it helps me to understand of why and what the sentence is about
Extra & Necessary Information <Extra Information> , which ,: Kind of get the idea, but people need more information <Necessary Information> which : Do not understand the idea, so writer must add information
Problems from our examples Opinions are statements of someone’s belief. When you say, “I believe…” or “I think that…,” you are expressing your opinion.
References • http://www.dbreed.co.kr/ • https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/a/a5/Grand_Theft_Auto_V.png • Aldridge, G. (2015, November 19). English Writing 2. Lecture. • Hogue, A. (2008). Expressing Your Opinion. In First steps in academic writing (p. 149). White Plains, NY: Longman.