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English 2. October 3, 2013 Pick up your journal before you sit down. JOURNAL Write about a time you were talked into something and you regretted it. Agenda. Take up signed Progress Reports DGP Vocabulary crossword Continue writing rough drafts; use internal documentation. DGP.
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English 2 October 3, 2013 Pick up your journal before you sit down.
JOURNAL Write about a time you were talked into something and you regretted it.
Agenda • Take up signed Progress Reports • DGP • Vocabulary crossword • Continue writing rough drafts; use internal documentation
DGP • sara read the novel to kill a mockingbird in her english class
Vocabulary 3 list • Crossword
Rough Draft Writing • 1. Follow the organization you set up in your outline. • 2. Completely cover one subtopic before you move to the next. • 3. Paragraphs should be SEVERAL sentences in length (6-8). • Due Monday, Oct. 7
Body Paragraph Template • Topic Sentence from thesis statement • Note Card Fact to support topic sentence (example) • Comment that adds to the fact • Another Note Card Fact to support topic sentence (example) • Comment that adds to the fact • Conclusion Sentence relating back to the topic sentence
Example Body Paragraph • (TS) No one can deny that cell phones have caused traffic deaths and injuries. • (NCF) Cell phones were implicated in three fatal accidents in November 1999 alone (Smith 21) • (CMT) Early in November, two-year-old Morgan Penne was killed by a driver on her cell phone. Morgan’s mother reports that the driver ran a stop sign and killed Morgan as she sat in her car seat. • (NCF) Later that month, a corrections officer guarding prisoners by the road side was killed by a man distracted by answering his cell phone (Smith 23) • (CMT) The driver said in court that when he looked up he had no time to stop. • (C) Expert testimony and witnesses all conclude that driving while phoning is dangerous.
Internal Citations / Parenthetical Documentation • 1. If the source has an author • Last name and page number (Jones 37) • 2. If the book has no author • First word of title and page number (Trees 872) • 3. If it’s a web source with no author • First word of article title only (“Leaf”)