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Lesson 3 Writing Strong Sentences Revising. Objectives: To identify and correct wordiness To identify and combine choppy; rambling sentences To identify and correct tired images. 1. Eliminating Wordiness. Empty Expressions:. 2. Combining Sentences.
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Lesson 3Writing Strong SentencesRevising Objectives: To identify and correct wordiness To identify and combine choppy; rambling sentences To identify and correct tired images
1. Eliminating Wordiness Empty Expressions:
2. Combining Sentences • Combine short, choppy sentences into longer ones
Coordinating Sentences When two sentences are of equal importance, bring them together with one of the following:
3. Refreshing Tired Images Cliches--an overused expression or idea.