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PHY CRG Report August 2003@ San Jose, CA Harry Peng: technical editor Rhett Brikovskis: section editor. D2.4 Comment Summary. Total 60 technical binding 1 technical non-binding 6 editorial. Clause 7: total 15 8 technical binding 1 technical non-binding 6 editorial Annex B: total 20
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PHY CRG ReportAugust 2003@ San Jose, CA Harry Peng: technical editorRhett Brikovskis: section editor P802.17D2.3 CRG
D2.4 Comment Summary • Total • 60 technical binding • 1 technical non-binding • 6 editorial • Clause 7: total 15 • 8 technical binding • 1 technical non-binding • 6 editorial • Annex B: total 20 • 20 technical binding • 0 technical non-binding • 0 editorial • Annex C: total 32 • 32 technical binding • 0 technical non-binding • 0 editorial P802.17D2.3 CRG
CRG result • Clause 7: total 15 • 8 technical binding Addressed • 1 technical non-binding Addressed • 6 editorial -- • Annex B: total 20 • 20 technical binding Addressed • 0 technical non-binding -- • 0 editorial -- • Annex C: total 32 • 32 technical binding Addressed • 0 technical non-binding -- • 0 editorial -- P802.17D2.3 CRG
Highlight and Summary • Clause 7 • All technical comments are addressed: • accepted ( 260, 261, ), • accepted-modified ( 262, 264, 267, 259), • accepted-duplicate (258 dup of 4, 265 dup of #264) • Superseded (263) P802.17D2.3 CRG
Highlight and Summary • Clause B • All technical comments are addressed: • withdrawn ( 635, 644, 649, 652 ), • accepted-modified ( 645, 651), • accepted-duplicate ( 634 ) • All other accepted P802.17D2.3 CRG
Highlight and Summary • Clause C • All technical comments are addressed: • withdrawn ( 660, 661, 665, 667, 669, 668, 672, 673, 674, 675, 676, 677, 678, 679, 680 ) • Mostly SPI description • accepted-modified ( 666, 658, 663, 662, 664, 670, 682, 684), • accepted-duplicate ( 683, 654 ) • Superseded ( 671, 685) • All other accepted P802.17D2.3 CRG
Editorial Comments • Will request for Editorial license to address editorial comments P802.17D2.3 CRG