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D2.2 Comment Summary

PHY CRG Report May 2003@ Montreal, Quebec Harry Peng: technical editor Rhett Brikovskis: section editor. D2.2 Comment Summary. Clause 7: total 45 29 technical binding 5 technical non-binding 11 editorial Annex B: total 71 60 technical binding 3 technical non-binding 8 editorial

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D2.2 Comment Summary

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  1. PHY CRG ReportMay 2003@ Montreal, Quebec Harry Peng: technical editorRhett Brikovskis: section editor P802.17D2.1 CRG

  2. D2.2 Comment Summary • Clause 7: total 45 • 29 technical binding • 5 technical non-binding • 11 editorial • Annex B: total 71 • 60 technical binding • 3 technical non-binding • 8 editorial • Annex C: total 168 • 146 technical binding • 1 technical non-binding • 21 editorial • Grand total = 284, 244 technical • Addressed all technical and technical non-binding comments • Rejected: • 0 • Punt status: total 2 • #414 and #1087 P802.17D2.1 CRG

  3. Clause 7 Highlights • Addressed all technical comments • Unsaintly words • PICS • Lots of formatting issues • 3 editor’s notes • All addressed • Official SAPI value for LAPS • Value is FE0316 • SONET rates • Punt to WG #414 P802.17D2.1 CRG

  4. Annex B Highlights • Addressed all technical comments • Unsaintly words • PICS • Lots of formatting issues highlighted • 6 editor’s notes • Editor’s note summary at the end of the report • All addressed • Signal_Fail and Signal_Degrade interface moved out of GMII/XGMII block • Punt to WG of #1087 P802.17D2.1 CRG

  5. Annex C Highlight • Addressed all technical comments • Management interface for signal_fail and signal_degrade no needed: clause C.1.4.3.1 comment # 1170 • PICS • Lots and lots of formatting issues highlighted • 4 editor’s notes • Editor’s note summary at the end of the report • All addressed P802.17D2.1 CRG

  6. Editor’s Notes Clause 7: • p.161 line 1 • Revision History: • p.169 line 42 (comment #451 [RL] ) • A SAPI value of FE0316is proposed, but is subject to approval by ITU-T SG-17. • To be deleted • p. 171 line line 4 • “This PICS proforma is at present incomplete...” P802.17D2.1 CRG

  7. Editor’s Notes Clause B: • p.337 line 8 • Revision History: • p.337 line 27 (comment # 1083 [RL]) • Receive state machine for GERS and XGERS • To be deleted • p.339 line 6 (comment # 1094 [RL] ) • Draft 1.0 comment #425 requests that each RS specify a “LINK_RATE” value. However, it is unclear if this is intended to correspond to the line rate, nominal data rate, or other rate. The resolution to Draft 1.0 comment #345 asks the rate ad-hoc to consider these issues before new text is added to the annexes. • To be deleted • p.343 line 39 • “10 Gigabit LAN and WAN PHYs operate at different data rates. An RPR MAC management variable (to be defined) is used to select the appropriate data rate.” • To be deleted as the RS is rate independent • p.344 line 45 : similar to comment #1094 ) • Draft 1.0 comment #425 requests that each RS specify a “LINK_RATE” value. However, it is unclear if this is intended to correspond to the line rate, nominal data rate, or other rate. The resolution to Draft 1.0comment #345 asks the rate ad-hoc to consider these issues before new text is added to the annexes. • To be deleted • p. 351 line line 4 • This PICS proforma is at present incomplete... P802.17D2.1 CRG

  8. Editor’s Notes Clause C: • p.355 line 8 • Revision History: • p.337 line 27 (comment # 1154 [RL] ) • Receive state machine for GRS and SRS… • To be deleted • p.358 line 16 (comment # 1170 [RL] ) • Coordinate with Layer Management section. Regarding MDSF and MDSD… • To be deleted • p. 351 line line 4 • This PICS proforma is at present incomplete... P802.17D2.1 CRG

  9. WG task • Punt comments • #414 and #1087 • Kway teow PHY nee Wet noodle PHY P802.17D2.1 CRG

  10. Editorial Comments • Will request for editorial license to address editorial comments. P802.17D2.1 CRG

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