Going to the Funfair

1. Going to the Funfair By Rohan Dronsfield and Hannah Bahmed Rohan and Hannah

2. Chapter 1To the fair One bright, sunny, summers day Rohan, Louise, Ella and Hannah were playing lots of games outside. Ella just took a old game that Louise’s Dad had when he was young. Suddenly out popped a advert for a funfair that was open every weekend. It said, Rohan and Hannah

3. Rodney’s Flash Funfair Lots of enormous, fun rides! Tuck in, brilliant restaurant provided £2.00 per child £3.00 per adult Family price £5.00 9:00am until 10:00pm They got so exited!!! They all rushed to their Mum and screamed, “Mum!!! Mum!!! There is a funfair every weekend! Can we go? Can we go? We hardly ever go out. ” Rohan and Hannah

4. “Well. . .It is treat day, so yes!” exclaimed Mum. They knew nothing about the danger that lie ahead . . . . . . . . . . Rohan and Hannah

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6. Chapter 2The Rides! They went on loads of fun rides like the wet, enormous water slide. Mum even allowed them to have popping popcorn and sticky candyfloss! There was only one of the rides left to experience. . . They got really suspicious about the ride because it was always closed. “Gee, I wonder why the ride is so gloomy and dusty! It looks like a rusty, broken down, greyish, brown ghost ride. Do you think that anybody has ever been in that ride because it looks so horrible?!” asked Ella They all thought no one was in there. So they went in . . . . . . . . . . . Rohan and Hannah

7. Chapter 3Going in There was loads of shiny cobwebs that glowed in the darkness. A small light beam, beamed in the gigantic room. Suddenly they heard clinking and clanking noises in the basement. They went down some grey, creaking staircase. Louise felt a cold shiver down her spine. At the bottom of the ride they spotted a funny looking man who had frizzy, white hair and he was controlling lots of bubbling chemicals. Rohan and Hannah

8. He was wearing a small, white, glowing laboratory cloak. It was so small that he was scrunched up. Rohan and Hannah

9. “Look at all that equipment and it looks like he’s making diamonds and, they're fake!!!” At that moment, the man turned round to check one of his bubbling chemicals but instead he saw the children. His face was like an erupting volcano! His eyes were wide as a anacondas mouth and as red as lava. His mouth was like a fearsome mouth with very sharp teeth. His nose had boils and a wart at the end of it. And the chase was on!!! Rohan and Hannah

10. Chapter 4The chase is on! They ran and ran, zooming upstairs and smashed lots of chemicals. They crawled into the kitchen and had a plan. They put a bag of slime and put it on top of the door. So they did it. At that moment the man came in and SPLAT!!! Rohan and Hannah

11. They rushed to their Mum and told her to call the police. So she told them, “Police! Police! There’s an evil mad man (with gung on his head), in the rides, the one that’s always closed!!! At the Funfair!” So suddenly the police car skidded round the bend and made a loud, !!!SREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECH!!! Rohan and Hannah

12. Chapter 5Caught Red Handed They told them the whole story from going into the ride to meeting the man, seeing the fake diamond's to putting the gung on his head. Rohan, Ella, Joe and Louise were so bored they even tried to go on more rides but Mum said, “NO! This place is dangerous, TOO DANGEROUS!!!!!!” So the police came and arrested the mad man and he shouted, “I’ll be back!” Rohan and Hannah

13. THE END!!!!!!!!!!! THE END Rohan and Hannah