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If your prospective customer isn’t 100% comfortable, you can forget about conversion. This presentation connects the dots between the words you write and the engagement it may or may not achieve. Learn how to put prospects in their comfort zone and “ease” them into doing business with your brand. By www.feldmancreative.com
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Copywriting for Conversion
Discomfort is the mother of all conversion killers.
The chief conversion officer: the copywriter.
You need to get your customer to agree this is the time and place to take action.
You need to get your customer into a comfort zone.
When readers don’t feel good, they’re gone.
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The key to overcoming confusion is clarity.
Write a clear headline.
Twitter ad We have a disconnect Landing page
Twitter ad A clear connection Landing page
Watch the language. industry gargon. marketing bull. And… “State of the art” “Core competency” “Right-sized” “Executing Real World Operational Strategies to Propel Innovation”
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Keep it simple. An effective web page has one job to do.
Landing page: Get the form filled
Build your case
Write what needs to be written. Don’t count characters, but make every character count.
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Overcome apathy by making sure nothing begins to feel optional, less urgent. irrelevant.
Application: A selling proposition articulates how your offer applies to the reader’s needs.
Benefits: Answers the question: what’s in it for me? How to __________________ .
An example of how to (blank)
Context: Qualify and disqualify.
Difference: What can you deliver unlike anyone else?
Emotions: Tap into pleasures and pains with power words.
Context: marketers Difference: focused budgeting Emotions: love
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You can’t bore people into buying. If attention is the web’s golden goose, boredom is its rotten egg.
Make it fun. • Lighten up • Tell a story • Push emotional buttons • Ask questions • Introduce characters • Speak to memories, values, dreams • Use your sense of humor • And remember who you are talking about… The reader
Give it rhythm. • Brief opening paragraph • More paragraph breaks • Vary sentence length • Subheads • Bulleted lists • Photos with captions • Pullout quotes • Web copy needs to be skimmer friendly
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Desire - Friction = Conversion rate Give readers what they are looking for: ease.
Introduce ease. • Shortcuts • Fast tracks • Templates • Cheat sheets • Checklists • Assure readers you’re leading them down the fast and easy path
Reduce risk. • “What if” always lingers in the reader's mind • Introduce safety nets • Address fears with reasons to be fearless
Speak to the dream. • Help readers imagine the satisfaction of realizing a positive outcome • Share the problem… “I once had the same problem you’re facing”
Overcome objections.
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Write conversationally. • Casual • Caring • Direct • Simple • Break rules
We talk too much like marketers because we’re not listening to our customers.
Empathize Develop pathological empathy for your customer. ~ Ann Handley
Use first and second person voice.