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Final Portfolio

Final Portfolio. Ethan Craig Mr. Kelly Writing 421 Alpha January 27 th , 2014. My Treasured Object. Mr. Kelly’s Comments. “Great story! And a fine tribute to your Grampy .”. Why I Chose This Piece. I enjoyed being able to write about my Grampy It is one of my best pieces of writing

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Final Portfolio

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  1. Final Portfolio Ethan Craig Mr. Kelly Writing 421 Alpha January 27th, 2014

  2. My Treasured Object Mr. Kelly’s Comments “Great story! And a fine tribute to your Grampy.”

  3. Why I Chose This Piece I enjoyed being able to write about my Grampy It is one of my best pieces of writing It gave me time to think about my Grampy and remember him

  4. “I can’t quite remember when he gave it to me, but I received this object from my Grampy Frank. He gave it to me so that I would have a place to keep all of my loose change, just like he did. The can that he used to make the bank had a crack in the side. So, he did what any other male adult would do; tear off a thin strip of duct tape and wrap it around the top of the can! He then used a black Sharpie and scrawled “Ethan’s Bank” down the side of it. It was perfect. I now had my very own ‘bank’ just like Grampy’s to keep my loose change in.”

  5. How I Wrote It First I decided what each paragraph was going to be about I proceeded to think about these ideas before writing down as paragraphs Proofread Peer editing

  6. Personal Analysis You definitely do a better job of something when you enjoy doing it.

  7. What if We Hadn’t Hit That Bird? Mr. Kelly’s Comments “Great conclusion. Maybe the bird carried the ‘Avian Bird Flu’ and you saved PEI millions in healthcare and thousands of lives. Pass my gratitude on to Linda!”

  8. Why I Chose This Piece One of the most fun essays to write It was my favourite topic this semester It made me think Mr. Kelly’s Comments

  9. “It was the morning of the U14 PEI Basketball Provincials in the spring of 2012. My mom and I were driving into Charlottetown for my team’s first game. As we drove along the Bedford road, a bird flew right in front of the van and collided with the windshield. “Uh-oh. We may have killed that bird, and that would be a bad omen,” my mother explained. Not six hours later, my left leg was in a cast and I was watching my team from the bleachers.” Mr. Kelly’s Comments

  10. How I Wrote It I thought back to the current events at the time of my injury Played out scenarios in my head and wrote them down Proofread Peer editing Mr. Kelly’s Comments

  11. Personal Analysis I feel that this piece is also one of my best of the semester. Again I feel that my introduction and conclusion are strong. This was the best topic I have written about and I wouldn’t change anything.

  12. What I Learned From Writing Four Two One • Always write out numbers in words • That I shouldn’t use ‘that’ so much that it seems that the only word that I use is ‘that’ • Spend time writing a good introduction and conclusion • Run-on sentences are very bad things indeed and there is no reason for them in any piece of writing no matter what the topic or subject and there is never any need to write a run-on sentence in any situation good or bad and you should never do this as the reader will be gasping for air trying to read the entire sentence in one breath

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