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A Trip to Remember

A Trip to Remember. Click here to begin reading the Story. My Best Trip Ever. (1) What was my trip like? (2) The answer is easy. (3) It was cold, dirty, and the most exiting time of my life. (4) I guess I should explain. Click here to continue reading the story.

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A Trip to Remember

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  1. A Trip to Remember Click here to begin reading the Story

  2. My Best Trip Ever (1) What was my trip like? (2) The answer is easy. (3) It was cold, dirty, and the most exiting time of my life. (4) I guess I should explain. Click here to continue reading the story Click here to go Back to the Question

  3. My Best Trip Ever (5) My mother is a astronaut, and she teaches at a university. (6) She studies the planets. (7) This year she was going with a group of people from her school to search for asteroids on the south america moon. (8) She invited my brother and me to come along. Click here to continue reading the story Click here to go Back to the Question

  4. My Best Trip Ever (9) On the asteroid hunt we camped in a moon desert with 20 other people. (10) Because the nearest town was 450 light years away, we had to take everything with us that we might need. (11) We packed soda chips, and our radio. (12) The moon was hot during the day, but night is when it was freezing. (13) We had no electricity, so we were very uncomfortable. (14) Wind blew the sand everywhere. (15) Even our food had sand in it! Click here to continue reading the story Click here to go Back to the Question

  5. My Best Trip Ever (16) “This is some trip,” I complained on the first day.(17) My brother quickly agreed. Click here to continue reading the story

  6. My Best Trip Ever (18) Every day we went with Mom to look for asteriods. (19) The first six days we had no luck. (20) Then, on the last day, my mom and I went hiking. (21) We didn’t expect to find nothing. (22) We just wanted to climb some cliffs before we had to go home, they were near the campsite. Click here to continue reading the story

  7. My Best Trip Ever (23) While we were hiking, we saw something sticking up out of the dirt. (24) As we dug around, we found some little pieces of asteriod! (25) Mom started taking pictures. (26) I ran back to tell the others. (27) Everyone from the group came to look. Click here to continue reading the story

  8. My Best Trip Ever (28) We had found parts of a huge asteriod! (29) After some research my mom and her friends realized that we had discovered the asteroid that had been there for millions of years! Click here to answer Questions

  9. Delete the comma after hot • Change dirty to dirtey • Change most to more • Change exiting to exciting Click here to go the next question Click here to go Back to the Story

  10. Change was going to been going • Change asteriods to them • Change south america to South America • Make no change Click here to go the next question Click here to go Back to the Story

  11. Change packed to pack • Insert a comma after soda • Change radio to radios • Make no change Click here to go the next question Click here to go Back to the Story

  12. The moon was hot during the day, but it was freezing at night. • The moon was hot during the day, it was freezing at night. • The moon was hot during the day. But freezing at night. • The moon was hot during the day, but when it was freezing it was at night. Click here to go the next question Click here to go Back to the Story

  13. Change didn’t to did’nt • Change expect to expecting • Change nothing to anything • Make no change Click here to go the next question Click here to go Back to the Story

  14. We just wanted to climb some cliffs near the campsite before we had to go home. • We just wanted to climb some cliffs near the campsite. Before we had to go home. • We just wanted to climb some cliffs. Near the campsite before we had to go home. • No revision is needed. Click here to go the next question Click here to go Back to the Story

  15. Mom started taking pictures and ran back to tell the others with me. • Mom started taking pictures because I ran back to tell the others. • Mom started taking pictures, I ran back to tell the others. • Mom started taking pictures, while I ran back to tell the others. THE END!!! Click here to go Back to the Story

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