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Exercise 20

Exercise 20. No.1. (Worse) Our algorithm is more accurate with respect to computational time. (Better) Our algorithm is more accurate than conventional ones with respect to computational time. No.2.

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Exercise 20

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  1. Exercise 20

  2. No.1 • (Worse) Our algorithm is more accurate with respect to computational time. • (Better) Our algorithm is more accurate than conventional ones with respect to computational time.

  3. No.2 • (Worse) The chemistry department cooperates with local industry more than their department. • (Better) The chemistry department cooperates with local industry more than their department does.

  4. No.3 • (Worse) The novel material is as strong, if not stronger than, available ones. • (Better) The novel material is as strong as, if not stronger than, available ones.

  5. No.4 • (Worse) The research department’s productivity is higher than the administrative division. • (Better) The research department’s productivity is higher than that of the administrative division.

  6. No.5 • (Worse) The two step-procedure assumes that the sample standard deviation is proportional the sample mean. • (Better) The two step-procedure assumes that the sample standard deviation is proportional to the sample mean.

  7. No.6 • (Worse) The novel material described herein has a higher withstanding temperature. • (Better) The novel material described herein has a higher withstanding temperature than other materials.

  8. No.7 • (Worse) The university stress discipline more than the institute. • (Better) The university stress discipline more than the institute does.

  9. No.8 • (Worse) The peak is as high, if not higher than, other ones. • (Better) The peak is as high as, if not higher than, other ones.

  10. No.9 • (Worse) The form of the fitting function should be defined in advance adopt the regression method effectively. • (Better) The form of the fitting function should be defined in advance to effectively adopt the regression method.

  11. No.10 • (Worse) The trade school’s dropout rate is lower than the university. • (Better) The trade school’s dropout rate is lower than that of the university.

  12. No.11 • (Worse) Temperature more significantly affects the product’s shape. • (Better) Temperature significantly affects the product’s shape more than other factors.

  13. No.12 • (Worse) Our laboratory manager emphasizes punctuality more that our division director. • (Better) Our laboratory manager emphasizes punctuality more that our division director does.

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