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Feature Article 2 nd Draft Revisions. What to do. Imagery. You need to add imagery to 2 different locations in your piece. Identify 2 areas that need stronger imagery, and make the changes. UNDERLINE the images you add. (10 points each). Literary Devices.
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Feature Article 2nd Draft Revisions What to do
Imagery • You need to add imagery to 2 different locations in your piece. Identify 2 areas that need stronger imagery, and make the changes. • UNDERLINE the images you add. (10 points each)
Literary Devices • Choose 2 of the following literary devices to add: • Simile • Metaphor • Personification • Hyperbole • Bold and enlarge the font slightly these devices in your paper so I can see where you added them. (5 points each)
Verbiage • It is important to use strong verbiage in your feature article. • Don’t settle for dull, bland verbs. • Select a paragraph that has weak verbiage. Add/exchange three strong verbs. • Italicize your strong verbs (5 points each) • Links to sites to help you with your verbiage. • http://www.visualthesaurus.com/ • http://www.owlnet.rice.edu/~cainproj/writingtips/preciseverbs.html
Conclusion • Your conclusion will be what leaves a lasting impression with your reader, so don’t slop through it. • Go to the link below, and choose which type of conclusion you will use. (if you already have your conclusion that is fine.) • http://www.kimskorner4teachertalk.com/writing/sixtrait/organization/conclusions.html • Write or revise your concluding paragraph and post to the wiki. • I will post feedback on Infinite Campus. (25 points)
Format • Be sure to check the format requirements posted on the Wiki. • Add your formatting today.