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PERSUASIVE WRITING. Mrs. Tiffany Gholston. Persuasion. Writing intended to persuade the reader to follow the writer’s way of thinking about something. Thesis. An effective thesis statement tells the reader specifically what you plan to write about
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PERSUASIVE WRITING Mrs. Tiffany Gholston
Persuasion • Writing intended to persuade the reader to follow the writer’s way of thinking about something
Thesis • An effective thesis statement tells the reader specifically what you plan to write about • Usually comes at the end of the introductory paragraph • Takes a stand or expresses a specific feeling about, or feature of, your topic • A specific topic plus a particular stand, feeling, or opinion equals an effective thesis statement
Organization • All parts of the essay should work together to build a thoughtful, convincing solution • Introductory paragraph is an effective beginning paragraph to grab the reader’s attention, provide information that identifies the problem, and states your opinion
Introductory Paragraph • First sentence should begin with an important or interesting fact, ask an interesting question, or start with a quotation to grad the reader’s attention • The second sentence should give some background information • The third sentence should introduce the specific topic of the essay. This should build up to the thesis. • The last sentence should give the thesis statement plus three reasons for this view without adding any details
Body Paragraph One • First body paragraph should build your argument in a logical way discussing the first reason you listed in your thesis. You should not discuss anything here except your first reason. • Start with a topic sentence. • Organize your points in a logical way with examples and illustrations • Avoid attacking others • Be brief and direct • Offer a reasonable solution • Present opposing argument accurately, but reveal its weaknesses
Body Paragraph Two • Second body paragraph should build your argument in a logical way discussing the second reason you listed in your thesis. You should not discuss anything here except your second reason. • Start with a topic sentence. • Organize your points in a logical way with examples and illustrations • Avoid attacking others • Be brief and direct • Offer a reasonable solution • Present opposing argument accurately, but reveal its weaknesses
Body Paragraph Three • Third body paragraph should build your argument in a logical way discussing the third reason you listed in your thesis. You should not discuss anything here except your third reason. • Start with a topic sentence. • Organize your points in a logical way with examples and illustrations • Avoid attacking others • Be brief and direct • Offer a reasonable solution • Present opposing argument accurately, but reveal its weaknesses
Conclusion • Should leave the reader with the feeling that there is no other alternative • Call for action • Restate important points
Powerful Sentence Patterns • Use strong active verbs • Ask a question • Use an exclamatory sentence • Open with an adverb • Open with a prepositional phrase • The verb precedes the subject • Use conservation or quotation • Use an appositive • Open with an adverb clause • Use parallel structure in words, phrases, and clauses • Open with an adjective • Open with an adjective phrase • The student leaped to his feet. • Why did the student leap to his feet? • The student leaped to his feet! • Suddenly, the student leaped to his fee. • At the buzzer, the student leaped to his feet. • To his feet leaped the student. • A concerned opponent yelled, “The student leaped to his feet!” • The student, Geoff Woolard, leaped to his feet. • After the game ended, the student leaped to his feet. • The student watched with excitement, screamed with joy, and leaped to his feet. • Excited, the student leaped to his feet. • Hyperactive by nature, the student leaped to his feet.
Instead of using “like” • Enjoy • Mind • Relish • Choose • Elect • Prefer • Select • Admire • Esteem • Regard • Respect • Approve • Endorse • Appreciate • Comprehend • Understand
Instead of using “very” • Intensely • Bitterly • Exceedingly • Surely • Especially • Unusually • Truly • Richly • Mightily • Powerfully • Extremely • Indefinitely • Immeasurably • Infinitely • Severely • Chiefly • Shockingly • Radically • Slightly • Incredibly • Fully
Instead of “Be” verbs • Appears • Feels • Smells • Tastes • Continues • Remains • Looks • Seems • Sounds • Becomes • Grows • Turns
Instead of said • Called • Cried • Responded • Demanded • Asked • Stated • Shouted • Whispered • Remarked • Questioned • Replied • Exclaimed
Instead of laughed • Snickered • Giggled • Roared • Chuckled • Chortled • Crowed • Guffawed • Cackled • Howled • Tittered • Hee-hawed • Bellowed
Instead of ran • Hurried • Raced • Scurried • Dashed • Galloped • Trotted • Bolted • Darted • Sped • Jogged • Sprinted • Rushed
Instead of walked • Staggered • Traveled • Trudged • Strutted • Marched • Hiked • Shuffled • Sauntered • Lumbered • Paraded • Ambled • Trolled
Instead of saw • Glimpsed • Noticed • Observed • Sighted • Spotted • Stared at • Glanced at • Eyed • Gazed at • Spied • Examined • Watched
Instead of sad • Downcast • Depressed • Woeful • Gloomy • Miserable • Sorrowful • Unhappy • Dejected • Forlorn • Melancholy • Crestfallen • Mournful
Instead of pretty • Beautiful • Lovely • Glamorous • Attractive • Elegant • Cute • Exquisite • Gorgeous • Stunning • Handsome • Striking • Fair
Instead of good • Great • Pleasant • Marvelous • Delightful • Superior • Wonderful • Splendid • Superb • Grand • Terrific • Amazing • Excellent
Instead of little • Teeny • Diminutive • Compact • Microscopic • Petite • Wee • Small • Minuscule • Miniature • Tiny • Slight • Minute
Instead of nice • Kind • Benevolent • Thoughtful • Gracious • Considerate • decent • Congenial • Agreeable • Courteous • Warm • Cordial • humane
Instead of funny • Farcical • Jocular • Amusing • Humorous • Witty • comical • Hysterical • Sidesplitting • Hilarious • Laughable • Silly • nonsensical
Instead of big • Towering • Huge • Large • Great • Gigantic • mammoth • Enormous • Tremendous • Massive • Giant • Colossal • immense
Instead of happy • Glad • Jovial • Jubilant • Joyful • Thrilled • cheerful • Merry • Contented • Pleased • Delighted • Jolly • elated
Instead of smart • Witty • Bright • Quick-witted • Knowledgeable • Intelligent • clever • Ingenious • Sharp • Brainy • Brilliant • Gifted • wise
Start sentences with these • Though • That • Unless • Until • When • Where • While • Who • Whose • Which • Whether • How • After • Although • As • As if • Before • Because • If • Since • So • Then • Whoever • Whomever
Transition words • In addition • Moreover • Next • And • Again • Furthermore • Besides • Finally • Similarly • Likewise • Equally • Yet • But • Though • Across from • As though • As if • Unfortunately • Also • Further • Although • However • Nevertheless • Otherwise • Instead of • Neither • For instance • Specifically • Once • Then • Now • Today • At length • Soon • While • Underneath • Above • Between • Farther • Below
Transitions continued • Equally important • First • Second • Third • In t he first place • In the second place • Last • To begin with • First of all • Secondly • To conclude • Finally • In like manner • By comparison • In comparison to • Compared with • Differing from • Notwithstanding • Even though • At the same time • Away from • So that • Therefore • Thus • Accordingly • Consequently • Hence • Provided that • Whereas • Unless • In the same manner • On the contrary • In spite of • On the other hand • To begin with • As a result
Transitions for sequencing • Again • Also • And • and then • Finally • First • Second • Third • Still • Too • Next
Transitions for time • After a few days • After awhile • Afterward • As long as • As soon as • At last • At that time • Before • Then • Until • Earlier • Immediately • In the meantime • In the past • Later • Meanwhile • Now • Shortly • Soon • When
Transitions for examples • After all • Even • For example • For instance • In fact • Specifically • Such as • To illustrate • The following example
Transitions for place • Above • Adjacent to • Below • Beyond • Closer to • Elsewhere • Far • Further on • Here • Near • Nearby • Opposite to • There • To the left • To the right
Transitions to add information • And • Too • Also • In addition • Again • Further • Besides • Furthermore • Moreover • Another • Equally important • Similarly • In the same way • In the same fashion
Transitions to limit, contradict, or contrast • But • Yet • However • Still • On the contrary • Although • Nevertheless • On the one hand • Otherwise • At the same time • On the other hand • Despite • Even though • In contrast • Instead
Transition to compare • In the same way • Like • Likewise • As • Also • Similarly • Again • Once more
Transitions to stress a point • For example • For instance • As you will see • To illustrate • To repeat • In fact • Truly • To emphasize
Transitions to show cause or effect • Therefore • Thus • After all • If • Finally • As a result • Consequently • For this reason • Because • Accordingly • For this purpose • So • Then • To this end
Transitions to list • First • Second • Third • Then • Next • After that • Lastly • Finally • In addition • Also • Too
Transitions to indicate time order • Before • After • Since • While • Then • Later • Finally • In the meantime • Meanwhile • Now • At this time • During • Presently • Eventually • Gradually • Sooner or later • Afterward • Today • Tomorrow • Immediately
Transition to indicate spatial order • Here • There • Beyond • Farther on • To the left/right • Over • Between • Beside • Nearby • Below • Adjacent to • Opposite to • Parallel with
Transition to summarize • Therefore • Thus • Consequently • In conclusion • In other words • As a result • On the whole • In summary • Clearly • As mentioned earlier • In short • In brief • In any event • To conclude • To sum up • Accordingly • Hence • as has been noted • as I have said • as we have seen
Transitions to show location • Above • Across • Against • Along • Among • Around • Behind • Below • Beneath • Beside • Between • Beyond • By • Down • In back of • In front of • Inside • Into • Near • Off • Onto • On top of • Outside • Over • Throughout • To the right • Under