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Editing for Publication. Or at least submission for a grade. Student Samples. Current trends in the commodity markets calls for this technology. The team captain, as well as his players, were anxious. Each of the children have a sack lunch.
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Editing for Publication Or at least submission for a grade
Student Samples Current trends in the commodity markets calls for this technology. The team captain, as well as his players, were anxious. Each of the children have a sack lunch. The terminally ill person and the person's loved ones experiences the stages of dying.
Noun Verb Agreement Nouns and Verbsare the basic parts of a sentence, the two teammates upon whom all others depend. They need to agree on one major thing: number singular (one) or plural (more than one). The number of the noun (singular or plural) determines the form of the verb, since verbs must agree with their nouns.
How do you fix it? • Make the verb agree with the subject and not the direct object. • Current trends in the commodity markets calls for thistechnology. • Current trends in the commodity market call for this technology. • Verbs do not have to agree with words that come between the noun and verb. • The team captain, as well as his players, areanxious. • The team captain, as well as his players, is anxious. • Indefinite pronouns such as each, everyone, everybody, etc., seem to be plural but function as singular. • Eachof the children havea sack lunch. • Each of the children has a sack lunch. OR: Each child has a sack lunch. • Treat most subjects joined with andas plural. • The terminally ill person and the person's loved ones experiencesthe stages of dying. • The terminally ill person and the person’s loved ones experience the stages of dying.
Suggestions for the Teacher Require that the students have (and use) current copies of Diana Hacker’s A Writer’s Reference for individual or less frequent writing issues. Have them bring it to class on a regular basis. Have the students work as teams (or in pairs) for revision. If you Google the grammar issue + “games” you can find many online exercises that you can work through and check as a class. For example, I Googled “subject verb agreement games” and came up with this (among many others):http://xnet.rrc.mb.ca/leshanson/Hot_Potato/SV_Agreement_6.htm