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TGai Motions. Date: 2014-01-22. Authors:. Comment #2983. Comment: FILS key establishment without a trusted third party clause does not clearly describe the protocol. Proposed resolution: This sub-clause is really hard to follow and does not describe
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TGai Motions Date: 2014-01-22 Authors: Rene Struik (Struik Security Consultancy)
Comment #2983 • Comment: FILS key establishment without a trusted third party clause does not clearly • describe the protocol. • Proposed resolution: This sub-clause is really hard to follow and does not describe • each message and its contents clearly. Please re-work to describe the protocol clearly. • Discussion: • Comment discussed extensively with commenter, so as to get clarification of comment • (since comment itself did not include actionable resolution text). • Verbal notes taken as basis for clarifications thought from commenter, resulting in • document 14/0180r0. Rene Struik (Struik Security Consultancy)
Motion #1 • Incorporate suggested resolution of CID #2983, as documented in • 11-14-0180-00-00ai-suggested-resolution-security-comment-CID-2983. • Result: Y/N/A Rene Struik (Struik Security Consultancy)
Comment #2222 • Comment: The description of what is encrypted and decrypted is in conflict with • section 11.11.2.4 which indicates that the portion of the association frames after the • FILS session element is subject to encrypt/decrypt. • Proposed resolution: Resolve the conflict with section 11.11.2.4. • Discussion: • Main steps: • Removed confusing section 11.11.2.8 • Explicitly mentioned in 11.11.2.4 that Container objects should be incorporated when constructing Association Response frame • Suggested to rename “Secure Container” to “Container” throughout draft, so as to remove confusion. • Note: This comment was also addressed in 13/1193r1 (posted September 17, 2013) Rene Struik (Struik Security Consultancy)
Motion #2 • Incorporate suggested resolution of CID #2222, as documented in • 11-14-0183-00-00ai-suggested-resolution-security-comment-cid-2222. • Result: Y/N/A Rene Struik (Struik Security Consultancy)