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PERSUASIVE RHETORIC . When people write for others to read, they become guides for others. They show readers new places and help readers see places where they’ve been with new eyes. Persuasion . Let’s see how it works.
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PERSUASIVE RHETORIC When people write for others to read, they become guides for others.They show readers new places and help readers see places where they’vebeen with new eyes.
Let’s see how it works • So, I looked up the popular "got milk?" ads that I see in magazines all the time. The one below is one with the celebrity Hayden Panettiere... • Sure enough, all of the persuasive concepts were found in the ad.
ETHOS • Ethosis "credibility...most professionals and leaders are assumed to be competent and trustworthy until they have acted otherwise." Since Hayden Panettiereis a celebrity, then it makes the advertisement credible. People think, “If this fabulous person drinks milk, then it must be a good thing for me."Right away, people are going to look at the ad and know think that it is something significant or reliable or trustworthy.
PATHOS • Pathos could be found in different ways. The emotion in her face is very strong and confident, which kind of sets the mood for the ad. The first line of the text says, "You don't have to be a hero to feel invincible." we can explain pathos as "the emotion of the message. Drawing upon the emotional premises of certain words that construct a very moving message."Using certain words like hero and invincible gives the ad a strong, heroic emotional feel.
LOGOS • Logos is explained as"The logical message. It appeals to facts, figures, and experts." • The ad says that "Some studies suggest teens who choose to drink milk tend to be thinner.” This statement gives the ad a sense of professional/expert advice.
What goes in a Persuasive Essay • Proposition • Argument • Follow the outline/rubric • Add in some ethos, pathos and logos
Proposition • The act of suggesting something to be considered, accepted, adopted, or done. • Astatement that affirms or denies something. • The PRO or CON side of an a DEBATE
Argument • It is your FIVE PARAGRAPH PERSUASIVE ESSAY! • It’s what you write in it to CONVINCE, Persuade, and Arguethat YOUR side is RIGHT. • Use QUOTES, FACTS, STATISTICS – anything that is EVIDENCEfor your side of the argument.
The Persuasive Essay (woot) • Using Logos, Ethos, Pathos, Propositions and Arguments, create the most convincing Persuasive Essay ever. • We will then turn it into a CLASSROOM DEBATE. Woot.
Introduction Paragraph • Hook or Attention Grabber: a quote, fact, or question -- Must be related to your topic. • Thesis statement: Simply and clearly state your position on the issue. • (Hint: Put the Pro/Con side of your argument in this statement) • Explanation of the Thesis statement – without “giving it away” – clarify your point of view. • Three arguments: Choose three arguments you can use to convince your reader of your position. Briefly state these arguments here.
Body paragraphs (yes, 3 of them) • List your first argument • (the compelling and effective argument) • (most thought provoking argument) • (most swaying or convincing argument) • Explain it – give details about your point of view • Use a quote, statistic or fact • Explain #3 and how it relates to your argument. • Conclude your paragraph or transition to the next paragraph
Conclusion • Summarize—restate your thesis statement and three arguments in different words • Make a closing statement. Tie your closing statement back to your opening hook. • (Hint: REWORD your thesis, don’t just cut and paste) • Button (tie it all together)
But before you go write it… Please Please Please pay attention to the upcoming slides. And DO NOT WRITE THIS KIND OF CRAP ON YOUR PAPER Please Please Please (becauseI have to read it)
Superfluous Stuff • Superfluous : in excess of what is needed, not essential, “ There was a lot of superfluous words in your essay.”
Don’t… • Automatically assume the reader knows the prompt you have been given. • Forget to explain your point. • Use the BIG WORDS if you don’t know how to spell them and use them correctly.
Do NOTuse the following phrases • By the way, • That • Sure, • I personally believe… • I recall back 2 weeks ago, • Out there… • I have to agree… • Today’s Modern World… • Hello, my name is… • I am going to tell you…
And these… • Have you ever…?(the prompt) • I am going to write about… • One hot sunny day… • Back in the day… • I hope you liked my paper. • The End!!! • Have a nice day. • !
And these too… • OMG, LOL,LMAFO • ;) • Like • The thing is… • I say that because… • This one time… • My point is… • I think • Honestly • In short • I disagree with the quote • It/this means • It matters • In conclusion
Never start a sentence with: • Well, • So, • But, • And, • Since • Or • Like
FIND SYNONYMS FOR THESE WORDS!!! • STUFF • THINGS • GOOD • BAD
Know the Difference!!!! • Too/two/to • It should/it shouldn’t • Whole/hole • Was/were • In/on • There/their/they’re • Your/you’re • If you don’t know the difference, come see me.