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The Good VS The Bad

The Good VS The Bad. What works and what don’t. Poor Example #1. I’m a photographer and I help people take photos. So if you know anyone who wants my service, please pass to me. Thank You. Revised Example #1.

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The Good VS The Bad

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  1. The Good VS The Bad What works and what don’t

  2. Poor Example #1 • I’m a photographer and I help people take photos. So if you know anyone who wants my service, please pass to me. Thank You

  3. Revised Example #1 • I’m looking out for couples who are about to get married and wants an experienced wedding photographer

  4. Poor Example #2 • If you know any companies who needs IT support, pass to me.

  5. Revised Example #2 • I want to connect with companies with staff strength of 1 – 20 and don’t have their internal IT department and is looking to outsource their IT support.

  6. Poor Example #3 • If you know anyone who wants to advertise on my pregnancy website, let me know

  7. Revised Example #3 • I am looking to connect with the marketing director of Pampers, which makes diapers for babies.

  8. Thank You Very Much-Next Week: mystery topic! Download from DropBox Folder

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