Year 10 English

1. Year 10 English Welcome! Heading: Introductions Aim: To listen carefully and speak clearly and confidently

2. Organisation! • Red exercise book set up – • Title page – personality collage to stick in • Make pocket at the back • Use blue pen, keep it neat and date your work. • You choose what system you use for your class notes – mac notes • Make sure you keep organised and follow the systems!

3. Introductions • Aim: To listen carefully and speak clearly and confidently Instructions: Interview your neighbour. Find out the following 1. What are three things he enjoyed about the summer holidays (N’thing is not an answer!) • What’s the last book they read (I don’t read is not an answer) • What are 2 things he is looking forward to this year Presentations: Remember clarity, variety, confidence in presenting Introductions – the course itself

4. Autobiographies Aim to write using a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to create a lively voice • Task: Write a letter to yourself, which you will open when you are 21, reminding yourself about what you’re like. You can ask SOME questions about your future but the emphasis should be on reminding yourself what you used to be like. • Shared planning – what sorts of things would you include? Class mind-map • Shared introductions • Individual writing • Best line feedback

5. Autobiographical Collages • Aim: To use visual symbolism to represent aspects of your personality • Discussion – what is personality? Teacher modelling – my personality collage Drafting time Homework Requirements

7. Mrs Thomsen’s Personality Collage • 32 yr old Dunedinite, married to Chris, sons called Matai and Luca, cat called Lloyd • Loves to read, cook, play with son and nieces, hang out with my extended family • Laughs • Creative • Not logically minded but loves a challenge • Inquisitive • Organised • Loves routine • Dislikes rude, thoughtless people and being disorganised! • Writes easily • Morning person

8. Reading Comprehension • Aim – to read carefully and support answers with evidence from the text • Poem: “Bred in South Auckland” by Glen Colquhoun and discussion • Comprehension questions – full sentence answers, support your thoughts with short quotations • Do you get it? Write another stanza, using the same structure • Option starter:

9. Bred in South Auckland – Glenn Colquhoun previously published in The Art of Walking Upright (Steele Roberts, 1999) I drive a car that is falling apart. There is a bog in the body. There is rust in the doors. Occasionally it does not have a warrant. Sometimes I sleep in large rooms full of people. I eat too much fried bread. I am late to meetings. I go to housie. My nose is flat. I say Raw-tore-loo-uh. Some people think I am a bloody maori,

10. I have been to university. I have a student loan. I photocopy my tax returns. Most mornings I read the newspaper. I make lists of things I have to do and like to cross them off. I cut apples into quarters before I eat them, Then I cut the pips out. I put my name on things. I listen to talkback radio. I use EFTPOS. Some people think I am a typical pakeha.

11. Last week I drove into a red light, I did not slow down at a compulsory stop, I changed lanes on the motorway and did not use my indicator. When I was a boy I went to see Enter the Dragon, I took one lesson in kung fu. My parents made me do my homework. My brother gave me chinese burns. I like beef and pork flavoured two minute noodles. I light incense when the house smells. Once I dug a garden. Some people think I am a blasted asian.

12. When I was a boy I learned to swear in Samoan. I went to school in Mangere. I played rugby in bare feet, Sometimes I shop at the Otara markets. My family come from overseas. I used to work in a factory. Once I helped cook an umu. When it is summer I wear a lavalava. I drink pineapple juice. I like to eat corned beef. Some people think I must be a flaming coconut. I think I am the luckiest mongrel I know.

13. Reading Comprehension • Aim – to read carefully and support answers with evidence from the text • Poem: Bred in South Auckland and discussion • Comprehension questions – full sentence answers, support your thoughts with short quotations • Do you get it? Have a go - write your own version!

14. Reading Comprehension • What is this poem about? • What are the four cultures talked about? • Which does the author belong to? • What derogatory words are used, explain them and say why they are used. • In what style(s) is it written? Why is this interesting? • Why does he call himself “the luckiest mongrel I know?” • How does it relate to (a) you (b) every kiwi? • What do you think about this poem? • How does Colquhoun use humour? Does it appeal to you? • How accessible is this poem?

15. Understanding Style and Form Goal: To be able to show an understanding of an author’s style and form through imitation ‘Bred in South Auckland’ question recap: G/W: What do you notice about the way this poem is structured? List all the patterns you observe. Your turn: Write 2 – 5 more stanzas, using the same structure I used to wear a scarf over my hair for work I had hooped earrings I often wore skirts and smokey black eyeliner I laugh loudly and talk too fast Some people called me a gypo

16. Discussion - Dissection Poetry - discussion Write down the words/ phrases you don't understand and what ideas they are referring to; "Some people think I am a bloody Maori“ • Bog - patched a hole with adhesive product • Car warrant - not enough $$$ • Sleep in rooms full of people - whare- nui sleeping on the marae • Fried bread - rarwina • Housie -bingo • Flat nose - Maori appearance ( not necessarily!) • Rawtoreloouh - Rotorua – pronunciation "Some people think that I am a typical Pakeha“ • University - education • Student loan - at uni - debt • Tax returns - financially savvy • Write lists - organised • Eftpos - $ in bank account

17. "Some people think I am a blasted Asian“ • Red light - bad driver • Not using indicator - bad driver • Kung fu - martial arts • Homework - tiger mum • Chinese burns - Chinese torture • Noodles - classic asian food • Incense - Spiritual • Garden - market garden "Some people think I am a flaming coconut“ • Mangere - • Rugby in bare feet - • Otara markets - • Overseas - • Factory worker - • Umu - • Lavalava - • Corned beef - • Flaming coconut -

18. Now turn these ideas into short connected sentences in a stanza about that culture. • Bred in Dunedin • I live in the land of the long white cloud • I have honey in my cupboard and milk in my fridge • I can sing waiata, do poi and participate in a powhiri • I love the All Blacks and eat sausage rolls while watching the game • Some people say I am a laid back Kiwi Have a Go! - My Cultures • What cultures do you identify with? (You will need at least 2!) • What are the stereotypical connotations/ attributes of those cultures? (positive or negative) • How can you phrase these ideas in a casual sentence? (See below for my e.g.)

19. Teenage Culture - Stereotypes Think of all the stereotypical groups you could belong to . . Emo, nerd, sports jock . . . Write a sixth stanza that covers this – remembering to include humour and irony

20. Personal Reading Log – AS 1.10 • As a class we are going to complete a mock reading response together. Reading Response #1 Jo Blogs 10JI Title: Bred in South Auckland Author: Glenn Colquhoun Text Type: Poem Summary: (2-3 sentences very brief) This poem is about . . . Log: This poem evoked . . . This gives the reader . . .

21. Attitudes to English Aim: To reflect on your skills in English and barriers to achievement Discussion: What might barriers to learning mean? Complete student profiles – best handwriting, best ideas! Attitude to reading Create a list of your top 5 all time books For each one, write a detailed explanation of what it was that you liked about it Feedback

22. SEXY Plans • Statement – Restate the Q • Explanation – Explain the Q • eXample –3-4 ideas that use evidence to back up your ideas • You Add – Tie it all together and try to make an overall statement to finish.