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Sentence Composing

Sentence Composing. Hatchet G. Paulsen. Chunking to Imitate. Model: Then he turned and stood still with the sun at his back and studied the water again. Chunked: Then he turned / and stood still/ with the sun at his back/ and studied the water again. Imitation :. Chunking to Imitate.

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Sentence Composing

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  1. Sentence Composing Hatchet G. Paulsen

  2. Chunking to Imitate • Model:Then he turned and stood still with the sun at his back and studied the water again. • Chunked:Then he turned / and stood still/ with the sun at his back/ and studied the water again. • Imitation:

  3. Chunking to Imitate • Model: He was in the bushes in moments scattering the birds grabbing branches stripping them to fill his mouth with berries. • Chunked: He was in the bushes in moments / scattering the birds / grabbing branches / stripping them to fill his mouth with berries. • Imitation:

  4. Unscrambling • and trotted back around the lake Then he picked up the • where the fire had burned down spear and bow and • to glowing coals trotted back around the • then he picked up lake to his shelter, • the spear and the bow where the fire had • to his shelter, burned down to glowing coals.

  5. Unscrambling – cued with punctuation • until it stopped wiggling, He held the fish against • at what he had done. the sky until it stopped • He held the fish wiggling, held it and • against the sky looked to the sky and • and felt his throat tighten, felt his throat tighten, • swell, swell, and fill with pride • and fill with pride at what he had done. • held it and looked to the sky

  6. Unscrambling • looked inside He walked to the • he walked to the next cabin next cabin, looked • huddled in the corner inside, and saw a • and saw a body body huddled in the corner.

  7. Unscrambling to imitate • Model: When he awakened the sun was cooking the inside of his mouth and had dried his tongue to leather. List: Imitation: • the sun was cooking When he awakened the • and had dried his back sun was cooking the • like sandpaper nape of his neck and • when he awakened had dried his back like • the nape of his neck sandpaper.

  8. Unscrambling to imitate:your turn • Model: Sitting alone in the dark, his leg aching, some mosquitoes finding him again, he started crying. List: Imitation: • his legs aching • running ahead of the pack • he started wheezing • some mud splattering his t-shirt

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