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Last class review 14010107 Ryuhyun a
Correction Symbols • Preposition • Wrong word • Add a transition • Article • Punctuation • Verb tense • Connect to make one sentence
Example 1 • I love hanging around with my friends, so I go dinner parties often. It’s fun to meet and chat with my good friends, but sometimes It goes too much.My friend Ralph fought withDJ, and lost his front tooth last night.
Example 1 • I love hanging around with my friends, so I go dinner parties often. It’s fun to meet and chat with my good friends, but sometimes It goes too much.My friend Ralph fought withDJ, and lost his front tooth last night. prep preposition ww Wrong word Add a transition T art p article punctuation
Example 1 • I love hanging around with my friends, so I go to dinner parties often. It’s fun to meet and chat with my good friends, but sometimes It goes too far. For example, My friend Ralph fought with a DJ and lost his front tooth last night.
Example 2 • We meet from 9:00a.m. Suddenly, he was tired. So he went home but I didn’t.
Example 2 • We meet from 9:00a.m. Suddenly, he was tired. So he went home but I didn’t. vt Verb tesne Connect to make one sentence
Example 2 • We met from 9:00a.m. Suddenly, he was tired, so he went home but I didn’t. -> Do not start a sentence with ‘FANBOYS’. (coordinating conjunction)
Example 3 • I’m shit-faced. He went home but I didn’t. I lied to my mom but was sharply scolded when the truth got out.
Example 3 • I’m shit-faced. He went home but I didn’t. I lied to my mom but was sharply scolded when the truth got out. p punctuation
Example 3 • I’m shit-faced. He went home, but I didn’t. I lied to my mom but was sharply scolded when the truth got out.